i do not like the shark, now i know hes plans. evil person.

i like zeke, but he seems very confused.

I was crying my eyes out at the end! I absolutely love it!

is the shark boy evil?

i wonder if they can kill the soon to be husband...

i understand more now, yet so little. who is zeke? who is the old mean one? one of 13, hm hm. im a sucker for romance, i hope there will be some.

im abit confused, not used to nigh world fics. but i want to read more. i hope i can grasp the different charachters soon. i do like the story!

come on write the nexts chapter of what happen and the there together i love the story more if you write more to it and the story was great and u're awesome write more to it and if there is write me whats the story name :)

Zeke will be reborn. right? Thank God
I was so depressed that when died.

I have started to wonder what Blue really wants. I mean, what on earth is he chasing? what motivates him to do...everything he does?

The story was awesome. That's what i think about everything you've written. You're writing is incredible. Blows me away every time.

I was so desperate to know what happens that I was up reading all night. And I'm going to be blaming you if the power of my lenses has drastically increased.

Keep writing, And I promise you I'll do my best to keep reading.

Thank You

OH MY GOD! Jepar - A gym teacher!
I guess its fitting. But completely unexpected.
I agree with Celia.

That was really really spectacular. I think it is one of the best stories I have read that was based off of the Night World series. I am blown away.

Not beautiful but something better,

this is beautifully written,you should be proud.i know i started rading this i long time ago cos i recognise it,i'm not entirely sure why i didnt finish reading it.i probably saved it in my favs and got pulled away from it for a while and forgot to go back.sorry!but i'm back no and about to read on!

willow
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ps.i really got into the mind of the character and i was nearly shaking with anger,disgust and heartbrake at the last part.very well done to gte that reaction from your reader!

Wow, your stories are so vivid and rich in character. Been a fan of all your stories because they not only fill in the gaps where Nightworld lapses, but the characters you've created (especially Blue and Chatoya) are so real that it feels as if L.J Smith has been giving you guidance all along :) Looking forward to reading more, and seeing if Blue and Chatoya can eventually learn to love each other for who they are. Even though Blue is pure evil and I'd hate for you to take all of his evilness away :P Anyway, great work, I also love Cougar and Jepar :) Keep writing!
SunStar~

Okay, I had to leave you another review after I found out these are YOUR characters not LJ Smith's! -Gasp- So even Blue, and Chatoya, they're your characters as well? Dear lord. You know I skimmed through Chimera before deciding to read Ripples, and for some reason I thought it would be one of those fics I wouldn't be able to understand because I wasn't familiar with the Night World series. So, I decided to read Ripples instead. Huh. I'm gonna have to go back and read it now, lol.
And another thing- how'd you manage to come up with such fitting character names? Because I know that whenever I write an original fic, it's always difficult to think of names for a character; you don't want them to be common names, and they need to fit the character's personality and be memorable at the same time. When some authors try to go for the whole 'unusual names' thing, they just end up having names that are too weird and can't even be pronounced. (For example I read a story once where the main character was called Krthiqan. I don't know about you, but that name just doesn't do it for me.) So, yea. Delphine's name totally suited her character, as did Finn's and Blue's and Zeke's. Actually, they all fit really well. What I am trying to say here, is that you are an even more amazing author than I originally thought. Heh. And I'm really glad you're going to end up writing that Celia/ Ri story sometime. And Aspen; you know I had to go running to read your story called Remember because you said it has some Aspen in it- he's becoming one of my favorite characters as well. Anyway, enough of my rambling. Keep up the awesome work,

-Rose