Good story so far. I'm hoping that you will update it. Abandoned stories are no fun. :(

Spark

oh my god. That is GREAT! i realize I must be spamming you on a REALLY old story since this was last updated, like, 6 years ago or something xDD but I wish you'd finish it... I mean, the next chapter is called "raging hormones"? I NEED TO SEE THAT XDD

peace out

Awesome fic! The second i read Smith was talkin to 'Thomas' i totally knew it was Neo. I keep mixing up Jones and Brown, can't match them to Matt or Adam. Well anyways good story.

Nehoo, bye-bye!:D

VERY GOOD! i am loving this story it is very well written. cant wait to read more!

Aw he's found a "friend". Hehehe cool, I like the way you characterise Brown too, completely patronising older brother style.

this is way cool, please update soon! By the way Shadow it's me Reaper, you write really cool fics!

I am so loving this! Hope you continue soon!

Another wonderful chapter. Neat twist with Trinity, making her old name Carrie...I guess thats all.
Bye.

Smith in semi Goth mode is a strange mental picture, but then them lot as teenagers is odd enough to start with! And Mero being the Twin's uncle. Cool chapter.

Hehehe cool. Smith had to learn that calling him Mr Anderson annoyed him somewhere. And calling Trinity Carrie is a cunning plan too. Just thought I would point out that suit, as in clothes, does not have an e on the end.

"You know I hate that!"

"That's why i do it, Tommy."

Classic

Very interesting. I can't wait to see where this goes. Please continue.

Cool chappie. Write more. Sorry this sucks so bad...It's 2:29 am.

Very interesting take on the Agent we all love to hate. I enjoy it when fanfic writers try to examine the existence of artificial sentience from the inside. Do I sense an encounter between teen Smith and teen Trinity *crosses fingers*? And making Smith and Neo (whoops, did I give it away? *grin*) friends was a stroke of genius. For more inspiration as you explore the character of the future rogue Agent, you may want to read Tanathir's "Conversations with Smith," available at w.geocities.com/tanathir_canathel/Smith.html. This work will be especially helpful, I think, if you ever give Smith a high-school romance (oh man, I can't wait...) I hope you keep writing.

Got bored. Read this. Will continue reading as long as you keep posting.

Bye. _

P.S. I have a major crush on Smith now.