|Reviews for Where Your Loyalties Lie|
| Saffron 3/19/08 . chapter 17
*laughs* Oh my god! It's been years since I've read this and it's still good even after three years:) I have to admit (and I'm probably not the first to say this, but...!) I would like to see this fanfic finished.
It's just so good; the plot, the characters, the relationships *looks over at Enrique and Aquana* or lack there of! There is also the magic and mayhem, the fight scenes, the tension and the betrayal!
However, I also know what it's like to be busy (and having to commute to reality on daily basis!) and that is understandable. I shouldn't be reading this either, I've got loads of work to do myself!P
I guess the only thing I can do is try to encourage you and pray that someday chapter 18 will make its way to If not, then that's where the imagination comes into play! *lol*
Good luck with whatever you do!
Ciao for Now (_)
| TouchOfChaos 4/12/06 . chapter 17
You haven't updated in like over a year! Your story is on my favourites dudette!
It seems as if it's Michael/Carly. I think Michael is OOC but I want Jhonny/Carly moments! And Tala...I LOVE HIM! Update for the love of God! ;) Sorry I just love that smiley.
| insanity-ward 3/20/06 . chapter 17
omg!i luv ur fic!...it's so way awesum!...and personally i really like Carly's personality...and Enrique and Aquana are being so stupid!...it's so way obvious that they like eachother!...and i REALLY like Johnny's and Tala's personalities...their awesum!...but i still don't get how Carly and Johnny are gonna get together...? very interesting...and then there's Kane and Carly's past...wow...i really like ur story!PLZ UPDATE SON CUZ THE LAST TIME U UPDATED WAS MORE THAN A YEAR AGO!
| Bec 2/11/06 . chapter 17
get those fingers of urs into motion, dude! u hven't updated for a year! plz update! dun let dis story waste away! ya gotta update! c'mon its too good not to! think of how the poor story feels! it must be sad! it hasn't beed updated for a year!*sniff* now i'm sad too...UPDATE!
| UniGirl 9/2/05 . chapter 17
Wow... it's been so long... I completely missed this update... And it's already august *pokes you* which means you *MUST* update again... well I understand your business ...
I loved the part with Michael and Tala... *hearts ebil Tala in this fic* It was written well too, and poor, poor Michael, but Tala was so well written and he was so cool and *goes into fangirl mode* I wonder who died to make Tala that angry...
Anyway I'm sane now. Poor Enrique... and poor Aquana... They seem to be getting in trouble a lot, don't they?
*is still waiting for the "Dark Moon" thing* Wait... is Enrique gonna save Aquana on that day or something...
I'm still trying to figure out who Kane was... and why Flora's so obsessed with Tala... *must reread the fic* It's been to long
| mewmewlover55 8/2/05 . chapter 17
you have to get Aquana and Enrique together :D ur story is amazing update soon
| Mirror 6/27/05 . chapter 17
Gr... i hate William! Johnny has to kill him! Die u stupide idiotic person! Newayz... update son! I'll be waiting for the pairings to change! I just love Johnny/Carly!
| Tala666 5/28/05 . chapter 1
Hey! Do you think you can up date soon? I've been waiting forever!
| This is How I Disappear 5/23/05 . chapter 17
*takes deep breath* ...don't u luv copy paste?
| charl 4/2/05 . chapter 17
its a beautiful story mann. hee.
story and author's been loved. woohoo-!
poor aquana...CANT ENRIQUE SIT DOWN AND LISTEN TO THE LADIES QUIETLY FOR ONCE? ladies, meaning both Aquana and Carly.
x) men should give in to women. shouldnt they?
anyw. poor michael as well. Tala quickk realise he does have feelings for Flora! D
and Johnney and Carly...um. yeah. well. im hoping that their relationship will...strengthen faster. quicker. relationship as in the L-worded one?
yeah man.! xD
okay. update soon and asap okay!
| kai-cutie-angel 3/10/05 . chapter 17
o! finally, ive got the chance to review! I love it! altho... i dont like tristan and michael gettin in the way... but i still love it! keep it up! i really wanna see wat happens between carly and johnny,...
| crystal 2/26/05 . chapter 17
i'm waiting for you to update please i love this fic so much i think it's kinda popular too so why don't you update PLEASE!
| Dandelion Wine 2/24/05 . chapter 17
Heheheh, seems like I've found your other story! I really like this, Carly's so off-the-edge in here! She's such a rebel. And I also noticed you've put Aquana into this story as well. Very good. I really like her. But I'm worried about this Dark Moon thingy. Oh, and I found a piccy of a helbeird, or however you spell it, and I just want to say I hope I never bump into Aquana in the dark. Um, I loathe William, and I rather dislike Tristan. In my mind's eye, I see Yu-Gi-Oh! Tristan. Hmph... And I really like Tala. He's so bad, I just want to hug him! Or maybe go a lil' bit futher... *blush* He's so hot... *bites lip, looking very tempted* I'd better go before I try to catch and makeout with Tala... *walks throught reviewing room door, but comes running in again almost immediatly* Maybe I can borrow him one day when he's not plotting evilly? Like when you are not updating? *bites lip again, blushes furiously* Nhm...
| Saffron 2/14/05 . chapter 17
YAH FOR THE BATTLE SCENE! Are Enrique and Aquana EVER gonna get over this? "this" applying a great deal between them. Fiances, etc. Poor Michael! *cries river* ;_; Tala is truly EVIL! P Hopefully he'll get better as the ff progresses on.
Sadly, I can't think of much else except, we need some more Carly/Johnny fluffyness. I'm hoping in the next chap I will get my wish:) Good luck with everything;) Try to update as soon as you can!
Cioa for Now(_)
| Keri 2/14/05 . chapter 17
Loved it, absolutely loved it.