I love this story, it's my favorite Jack fic.

hahahaha. He turned me into a newt! well, I got better!
Love this scene in MP. Brilliant way of making it work.

A bit of monty python there... (gives thumbs up and shouts encouragement)

This is the best story I've ever read told in Jack's peculiar point of view!

I applaud you sir or ma'am. Truly great! Artfully written and interestingly told.

That was really really amazing. A lot better than some of the other fics I've read regarding Jack's past. Significantly better. I applaud you. *applauds*

Ah, what a treat it was to find this story! I had no idea where a story that begins with a pirate chasing a donkey around a church-yard would lead, but I'm so glad I stuck to it! You have a very nice handle on Jack's 'inner voice' and temperment. And I loved the characters you introduced.

Nathan and Sarah in particular struck a chord with me. . . what a little spitfire she was! I expected Nathan to be more of the co-hero of the story, but Sarah was ready to help her fellow slaves revolt long before Jack showed up, I'd imagine. All she really needed was for an opportune moment/person to come along and help stir things up a bit. Of course, Jack's quite good at that now, isn't he?

It's too bad Gabriel didn't suffer a fall into the grinder after everything he did to everyone. I suppose that would have been a bit cliché, but it would have felt so good. ;)

Your ending was wonderful. Nice and satisfying, with just a touch of bittersweet. . . just the way I like it.

OMG!

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STARTS READING MORE

Damn you, I have a early class to morrow and there is no way I'm going to sleep, thanks -_-"

aw poor Jacky, still you made me burst into laugh from time to time'. That usual does not happen when Jack get's tortured. Luv your story!

Wha, why didn't I find this story earlier? It's so good, so jackish with all the things that happen and the stuff he thinks, SO GOD!

Wow...this is amazing

You have a gift, use it wisely

WOW. That's all I can say. WOW.

WHOA.

Poor Jack. Poor Dawit...
They never should have done that. Never.
EVIL EVIL SLAVE TRADERS!

O.O
WHAT THE HELL?!
EVIL PEOPLE! Jack is a guy with a heart of gold, and all these other a-holes have rottign piles of **!! F**K YOU **!

"...I got better..."
HA!! That line from Monty Python was the clincher! PERFECTION!