Top story! grammar cud do wiv a bit of wrk but da plot rox! luv it!

it was good, and my only thing is you should get a betta to go fix ur typos . but it was good, i liked it a lot

Zero (who's too lazy to log in)

man!cool story!like it! in a scale of 1-10,i'll giveit a 100

nice ya story...me was crazy my mom was yelling at me when tried to read your story hehehe

lovely story! :D really remarkable... a little improvement on spellings and grammar, but the plot is flawless and perfect! suteki da ne... anyways, just a little more improvement... you're bound to be a good writer, with just a little more practice! just a tip from a fellow author! keep it rockin good! :D

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thanks a lot! :D

First and foremost I would like to say that your story is quite good, and I did enjoy reading most of it. Despite this I cannot help but notice the complete lack of correct grammar throughout most of the story. Now I'm not saying everything should be perfect (such a request is highly unreasonable and quite beyond my own skills and knowledge). Heck, I don't even mind frequent errors as long as I can understand what is happening. I have read quite a few chapters of your story and am being constantly put off by paragraphs in which I have to decipher what your trying to say. You have a great story, but I simply cannot enjoy it if my reading comes to a halt every few minutes due to me frantically trying to figure out what is going on. If you ever decide to go back and edit your stories for such grammatical mistakes or would just like to know more about the problems I have with your story send me an E-mail. Of course this could just be attributed to me being a bit picky, and if that is the case then I apologize. Good luck!

it is a kool story

GREAT PLOT! I found your story really really interesting. we I'm so hyper

i lok it you you no that Hanabi means fireworks i love it

hahahaha you like the song white flag that is the best is isn't

This was a wonderful story to read and the plot was magnificent!

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! This was the best story I ever read . It was so exciting and it may have been long but I LOVED IT! I hope you Write another one because this was great .Dose Sakura have an kids though?

You are welcome. I hope that you will keep writing stories like this ok. Well keep writing.

*Ngoc1231*

Excellent chapter and story, I had a great time reading it.

Like I said, I'll keep it short, typing not good.

For the last time (for this story at least)

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

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Glad u like my name! loved this fic to death!