Haha (_);

That's a really good story.

Golder Rule Nr. 1 : don't make a goddess angry.

This is really funny!

Mike

Review from the crypt! This story was hilarious. I love Belldandy's way of protecting whats her's. Very funny.

so any belldandy have her limits, eh? Poor belldandy. this one of the funnist fics i've read.

"Haven't had myself a taste of angelic muff in over a century, either." Bwahahaha!
It probably would take something like four supernatural women simultaneously planning to shag Keiichi to move Belldandy from merely being jealous to being Righteously Pissed Off.

Hilarious.

Could have at least credit Magicial twlight for their characters.

Good story, but Belldandy hasn't lived that long!

This was funny, and you even mixed in the danger of Belldandy's jealousy storms.

You're right, this does have a different air to it than "Perfect Detail". Twas very funny. Belldandy does go a little OOC since she is usually more concerned with Keiichi's happiness than her own feelings. She doesn't even know her own jealousy, if you read "Miss Keiichi" she seems rather confused by it. Still, this was an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work.

not bad...

The sad thing is I recognized almost all the girls as well. But I'm not a pervert! Really! Anyway, good work. This was a hoot.

I enjoyed reading it and there is nothing wrong with liking anime of the stranger type.

Very funny... and perfect at being so short...

HAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!Hmm, that was funny! Good grammar, too. Don't see that too often in a lemon, nosiree. Hmm, but this wasn't so much a lemon as a lemon parody, which as I love parody and lemon, is just an example of two great tastes that taste great together.