You make me quite envious - you caught Aragorn's mind and thoughts so perfectly, and I think he's a very difficult character to write. I love the conciseness and the self-discipline and purpose that marks his thoughts, and the language you use - it fits in beautifully with Tolkien's writing.

Wow, now this is what I would like my writing to be as I grow in skill. I really admire this story more than your parodies, it shows how fanfictions could be written rather than how they shouldn't. I hope you continue on with this one more than you do your parodies.

This is lovely. =0)
P.S. Well I haven't spoken to you for a long time. How are you?

N-I-C-E! Its really good... continue? please?

Indeed, I like this... Alot! It makes me glad that you can write this as Aragorns thoughts and actually have the whole story sound as though it really is him thinking all of it...

Amazing.

Keep up the great work. :)

Bonjour mes amis!

You know that I love it, its beautiful and extremely well written - there isn't really much that I can say! My favourite bit has to be:

'I do not see hope in his song but I see hope reveal itself in the midst of chaos and despair- friendship. Legolas and Gimli begin to see from each others eyes and begin to understand. There is light where there once was darkness.'

It just speaks the truth, its great to see how Aragorn observes the world around him.

Keep writing!

Half Awake Warning

This is brilliant, I can't wait to see where you go with this. It's beautifully written - now all we need is MORE!

Vanya sulie
HalfAwakeWarning

Hey its Kendall! I love it, it's so like interesting and seems so real!