 yuriytalaivanov 2006-08-04 . chapter 6 ...interesting...which kai went with boris and voltaire? the clone or the frozen one? and is this last chappie an alternate ending to this fic? |
 shadowwolf0379 2006-03-28 . chapter 2omg i love this story and i love the kai johnny pairing in the origional ^ ~
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 Blader Fairy 2004-10-11 . chapter 6 Love it!! Thanx fer yer review on my fic. The half bitbeast soul/half human soul and Kai's real Kai body idea was really original. |
 babymar-mar 2004-08-06 . chapter 6 ahahha thats so funny go 4-some !! no one can resist kai ^-^ i love it! please write more kool stories!! |
 babymar-mar 2004-08-06 . chapter 5 wha this alternate ending was so sad! im going to read the other one so wait for that review to!! this ending was lovable!! ^-^ |
 Rieka De-Volka 2004-04-10 . chapter 6. . . ok.
When you told me this was a weird story, I was expecting some smut, maybe a few battles, and if I was lucky, I would even get a plot...
What you gave me was a super short, heavy angst, heavy plotted story that had my heart jumping in my seat.
I take my angsty side has been rubbing on you ^_^
Great work Li, it was marvelous, although I'm serious, it was too bloody short. Ever think of a side story? Many details were left flying, like... what exactly was the revolution?! I didn't get it =P Or the D-Boys part... It was... freaky.
Anyway, it was a great reading, I do hope this' not the last of Beyblade I'll see from you, and if you get the time, go and read *you know what* it's going great.
Bye, and great work.
Fyne "Chaos Dragon" Inverse |
 Quatre Winner 2004-04-10 . chapter 6 Now *this* is the ending I like! Both Kais share their soul with a bitbeast? That's just awesome! Write a sequel to this about... something or other. *Blinks* Aw, crap! Random crossover Beyblade x Yami no Matsuei. I can see why but damn! Yamis, stop hitting me!
*Yamis Quatre and Kenshin smirk and they set aside their mallets. Ame, Kurai, Gail, and Amon shake their heads and don't interfere. They don't want to get sent to the Shadow Realm, after all.*
Quatre: *glares at her yamis* Anyway, if you don't mind, I might come up with a sequel to the happy ending. What was the pairing again? Kai x Tala x Johnny x Rei? Oh, boy, won't that be fun! Does the Real Kai get any action too? Hmm?
Anyway, this was a very nice fic. Too bad it has to end!
Ja ne!
Quatre Winner |
 Khnum 2004-03-25 . chapter 5...Wow. I honestly wasn't expecting that; you got me completely off guard. This is a truly engaging story, although I felt you could have developed the pairings and the plot itself a little more: the ending was a bit abrupt.
Still, it's a really cool tale and I can't wait 'til your next one.
Love, Peace, and all that Shizznatch,
Khnum. |
 Quatre Winner 2004-03-17 . chapter 5Well, I must say, this ending was rather sad, but fitting. Now I can hardly wait to read the happy one. Please put it up soon.
Ja ne! |
 black-howie 2004-02-10 . chapter 4ah! the... the... kai we all knew and loved... died! > |
 Quatre Winner 2004-02-02 . chapter 4Quatre: *blank stare* Oh my god, you killed Kai!
Yami Quatre: Bastard...ess?
*Kai rolls his eyes*
Kai: Forgive them, they're having a random South Park moment. And I'm not dead!
Yami Kenshin: Evidently.
Quatre: Anyway, I just read this whole fic and I think it's great! Yuri is Tala's real name? *blinks* I won't comment. I like Tala better though.
Yami Kenshin: You're reviewing the fic, not the show!
Quatre: Oh yeah. Anyway, like I said, this is a really good fic. Please continue soon.
Kai: Why am I half bit beast? Not that I'm complaining, but it's strange.
Takao: You're half bit beast?
*Kai rolls his eyes*
Yami Quatre: Takao no baka. He's only half bit beast in the fic.
Takao: Oh.
Max: Johnny and Kai? 0_0
Rei: This is a different fic. Why are you still reading the prelude?
Max: There's another fic? Oh yeah. Sorry. I just don't like the idea of Kai and Johnny together! He's mine!
*Max glomps Kai*
*Everyone looks at him in surprise*
Yami Quatre: Ok. I'm not even going to ask.
Quatre: Brilliant idea.
*Kouichi wanders in*
Kouichi: I got bored watching Takuya and Yamato fighting. What'd I miss?
Max: Kai's half digimon!
Quatre: Bit beast, not digimon!
*Terriermon pops in randomly*
Terriermon: Momentai!
*He pops out again*
*Everyone blinks*
*Jenrya pokes his head in*
Jen: Sorry. He stole Quatre's Millennium Staff.
*Everyone blinks*
Quatre: *sigh* We'd better go save the world Yamis. Anyway, to get back on track, I hope the fic is updated soon. I can't guess how it's going to end. Ja ne!
*Quatre and her Yamis run out*
*Kai and Kouichi stare sideways at each other*
Kouichi: What do you say we go ask Yugi to teach us Duel Monsters?
*Kai shrugs and walks out*
Kouichi: *sigh* Naturally. Ja ne!
*Kouichi follows Kai* |
 Mystical Moon Wolf 2004-01-31 . chapter 4Kai is killing Kai so that he can get Black Dranzer out?
But can't he do it in a less messy way?
Good for the Demolition Boys!
I don't think Enrique can take Black Dranzer down.
Okay combined bitbeasts can with all the bladers but not Enrique himself.
All those questions but so close to the end thios is really intense and it depends on Voltaire's decision.
I hope it is a happy ending at the end of the fic.
But you want to torture Kai so i'm not sure where its going to lead but i'm wishing it's a happy ever after. ^_^ |
 SpookShadow 2004-01-27 . chapter 4I dun wanna guess what happens... its more fun that way. Anywayz update soon. i feel like making a face... -(*-*)- |
 Dark Ice Dragon 2004-01-26 . chapter 4aw...i think.
it's great to know that pretty much every one liked him but it's kinda bad that they only found that out after he died.
it's weird but i have this feeling that the clone Kai isnt dead. 'coz the real Kai said that the body had to be hurt a lot but nothing about the body dying so...
Dark Ice Dragon |
 coda 2004-01-24 . chapter 3 this fic is great please please reveiw again soon! |