does Jenna die or does Mia die.

You didn't go overboard with the conspiracy theory, not when there are poisoned arrows and Lighthouses being blown up! And Mercury growing stronger... Yeah, definitely interesting. I have some idea what might be happening... Anyway, it is good. Perhaps Garet suddenly beats the archer a little too easily, considering the position they'd been in, but aside from that it's great. Oh, and remember (about your notes on planned pairings), pairings can be good, but close friendships are becoming more of a novelty in fanfic.

O. Scary ending. And good chapter. I really like it. Though I really wonder what happened to Ivan. Though you may have went a tiny tiny bit over board with the conspiration theory. Well, hope to read more soon.

This is pretty interesting. Like what you did with Ivan. Of course he wants his sword back...

what the light houses gone weyard will be destroyed with out alchmey please tell me there will be some way to fix this

great so far if this id the pairing i think it is Isacc/Mia
Garet/Jenna Ivan/Sheba i will be very very very very very very very very happy and if you stop updating i will kill you

Great chapter. I hope it won't be too long before next chapter because this is quite the cliffhanger. Talk to you later. Love this story.

Continue soon! Maybe u'll make this a Jenna/Isaac? 'cause there aint many out there...so i hope u do ^^

Still waiting for more of this great story.

Nice.

HOW COULD YOU?! JENNA! NO!! My very favoritest adept! I don't want her to die! and yes i am a girl but no i'm not...you know. besides that, it was good. :P

You hurt Jenna? Why you. How could you do that? You're mean. Still the story is good. I wonder who it is that want's to split up the team.

Ow...poor Ivan, he`s in trouble!
Captain: Do you have anything you wish to say?
Ivan: Yeah, I want my sword back.
hahahaha funny! well keep it up and update soon, your story is great!

it's good so far, keep it up. Is Ivan going to make it out alive and see Sheba?
While I was reading chapter two where the part said Ivan was late because of something but didn't tell, could that be a hinting of something?
Because it sounded like Ivan was up to something - not good...ok whatever...yeah...oh and Ivan sounded a little temperamental but it didn't really affect the story much (that's probably good)in the story still sounded good...
Anyways
Keep up with the story and update soon
GoldenDaydreamer

Hi, many thanks for reviewing my story.
Your story is super! I liked the part where Isaac is slow and Garet fast, that was funny. Has something happened to Ivan? Please update soon cause I really want to know!

Keep it up! (I`m putting you on my favorite authors list, and story list)