Wow! You did a great job with this one! :):) Pity that you won't do any fics until Sly 3 :(:( I love romance! :D You're a great writer! :):)

SWEET! Love the sly+carmeltia twist.Loved to write a Sly Cooper/StarFox crossover,If I could actually write on this website, because I don't have Microsoft anymore.All well.Just torture myself with reading and reviewing.Sorry about that I'm a sad story spreader.To the point loved it!!

that was good let me guess its based off of nightfire right?

Very nice! A bit too cliche, though.

Great ending to a great story, you're a great fanfic writer. I've finally finished "Battle Of Ultima" and gave it a very cute ending, plus I've finished "Vampire" which is a pretty depressing story, and I've just written "Apple Pie" which is a comedy I'm sure you'll like. Once again, great story! ^_^

Great!, good chapter to this great story. I've put up three chapters of my new fanfic, please R&R.
Keep up the good work!

Heyy!! Ur backk! YAY! Oh umm.. about writing.. I'm soo stupid for stopping! I can't leave sly cooper *sniffle* I'll probably start the next chapter soon hopefully.. dunno when, because it takes me AGES to write! But I'm not gone for good! Oh no! i'm here to stay!

* Mouth drops in awe*
Bently: Hello? Hello? * waves hand in my face* He's in complete shock Murray, help me wake him.
Murray: Right Bently * Takes another bite out of his sandwhich before walking up to me and smacking me upside the head*
Ow! * i grab my head* Jeeze that hurt!
Murray: Anytime * he walks off*
* still rubbing my head* right...anyways great chapter so far, I'm loving it!
Bently: And apparantly so is Sly and Carmelita. * motions to a door where wierd thumping sounds are coming from*
* I chuckle* well I'll go with you on that one Bently, keep up the great work man!

Yeah, nothing wrong with your story, but you could use a bit smaller blank spaces between lines and 007 isn't really RPG... keep it going anyway :)

No flames, you say? WELL SPOOT UPON YOU, ILLITERATE FIEND! SLY COOPER AINT NO RPG! SO I GIVE YOU A 0/10 AND A MARK OF GARGA TO BOOT! SARDINE! SARDINE! SARDINE! MUA HA HA HA! And besides, this was constructive criticism. MUA HA HA HA HA AHA HAA HAA HA HA! MUA HA HA HA AH HA HA *COUGH* HA HA HAA AHA AH HA HA HA HA!

aww how sweett...^^ i know my bio says im leaving, im still reading but im taking a short break. why woul i wanna stop reading sucha cool story?!

This story rules! itis a great idea to put Sly and Carmelita together, after all they are destined to fall in love.
If SuckerPunch made a sequel, this would be a great idea for one.
IT RULES!

* whistles the James Bond theme* Finally, i've been waiting for an update to this story! * snickers at Sly's remark* Lower center of gravity my rear, he planned that!
Sly: And how did I plan that exactly?
* I shrug* I dunno, i just know you did somehow!
Sly: * slaps forehead* ugh...
P.S. I noticed the story line sems to be the same to 007 nightfire, are you going to bring in the other bond girls as well or just keeping it with Sly and Carm?

cool! hope u update soon!

Cool!!