 crawler 2/16/12 . chapter 1 Lol really cute and funny story.I love horses and glorfy so to put them together was awesome.I want a horse like that! :D |
 Hunt Seat Panhead 12/7/04 . chapter 4some questions-
1. Aren't roses poiseness to horses or am I thinking of some other plant?
2. "Glorfy' was joking when he said bay was uncommon right?
3. What's wrong with geldings?
4. How do you come up with these names?
Bravo! Bravo! Correct termonalogy and everything!I had to laugh, Asfaloth reminds me of a horse at my barn actually he reminds of many horses at my barn. Stupid arrogant Throughbreds . . . anyway, this is one the better pieces i read in a long long time. Keep it up! |
 Web Walker 7/31/04 . chapter 7I really liked this story. I love how you had this mostly from Asfaloth's pov. It was cute and comical at the same time.
Keep up the good work. |
 Freya writes 11/19/03 . chapter 7So growing up hasn't changed Asfaloth a bit...not that I expected it to;)
And massacring those poor little Niphredils. Gorfy must be pretty much at his wits end to let him get away with that.
A pity the story has to end so soon. Please tell me you're planning a sequel? The exhilarating adventures of those two in the wild...sounds like a perfect exam break to me!
So... please? (big blue puppy eyes) |
 Erestor 11/17/03 . chapter 7It ended? Like that?
It was a good ending of course, but I didn't expect it to come so soon. So Asfaloth doesn't understand sarcasm? That was funny, and very true as well. And now Asfaloth is making up poems as well, and sadly, they're better than Lindir's. :)
Poor dead flowers.
Well, I enjoyed it very much, and I will be interested to see what other stories you write in the future.
Yours,
Erestor, Elvish Advisor
P.S.
You write wonderful long responses to your reviewers. It's very inspiring. |
 Clarenova 11/17/03 . chapter 7Odd. For all my (somewhat considerable) amount of knowledge of both the books and the movie(s), Hithaeglir has been the consistant spelling, but that isn't the point. *laughs*
Good ending. Poor flowers. *grouses at the dagger* |
 Night-Owl123 11/13/03 . chapter 6I wish that u would update everyday. I love your story! |
 Freya writes 11/13/03 . chapter 6EEp! Glorfindel is SCARY! Glowing AND turning purple...I am extremely happy none of my teachers ever managed that.
Also, I really like Meglin and Alquandil's songs. They give the events that very Rivendellian(?) cachet. Though they get away with laughing at the whole thing a bit too easily. Do they need any horses, by chance? At least Elrohir has been able to join in the delights of raising a foal.
PS (just in case my email doesn't come through) I gladly accept your offer. Many thanks and said stack of lembas are coming your way! |
 Clarenova 11/12/03 . chapter 6*laughs*
Poor Glorfindel. If he doesn't want the Asfaloth-killed dagger, he can give it to me. ) Funny chapter, as always. |
 Erestor 11/12/03 . chapter 6Poor Glorfindel and his ruined knife. Of course, now Asfaloth is in trouble. I can hardly wait to see what will happen next there.
And Elrohir and his new horse! That was very funny too. The two Elves who chose horses ended up chasing their horses around Imladris! Elrond has some very smart and coniving steeds.
I liked the two Elves up the tree, singing their little song and enjoying the show. That was a good touch.
I also liked Asfaloth's thoughts as he watched Glorfindel, especially the color chaning part.
Interesting alternative ending. It was even quite funny. Of course, it wouldn't have been funny if that had been how the story had really ended. Glorfindel can't loose this little war! I don't think he's going to, actually. Perhaps the two will compromise? Well, I can't wait. |
 Sara 11/12/03 . chapter 5 Asfaloth's thoughts leave me in stitches! :-) He is so stuck up! (if ya can say that a horse is "stuck up") I couldn't believe that he managed to take that dagger from Glorfindel, poor "Glorfy." Can't wait til he catches up with "Asfaloth the Most Wonderful Horse in Imladris" (who I bet is not quite as brave as he thinks he is) :-) Update soon! |
 Freya writes 11/10/03 . chapter 5Poor little thing! (smirks) well, he was asking for it!
I hope that being rescued by Glorfindel will bring his out-of-control self-esteem back to normal proportions (for a couple of seconds).
PS. I didn't get your email, sorry! |
 Erestor 11/10/03 . chapter 5As soon as I saw the title for this chapter, I prepared myself for something, well, exciting. And I assure you, I am heartily thankful Glorfindel and Asfaloth did *not* clash, because wonderful as Glorfindel is, he would have been trampled. But fortunately, he got out of the way in time.
I'm rambling already.
As I was trying to tell you, this was another very funny chapter. I can hardly wait to see if Glorfindel explodes when he sees the state of his lovely knife. I hope he does. That will be fun to watch. Asfaloth needs a little scare now and then. He's so incredibly smug all the time.
So very good chapter, and you've given us another cliff-hanger. I'm enjoy all this prompt posting. You've already written this story, haven't you?
Great job. And may the stars shine on you too for writing such a wonderful amusing story! |
 Clarenova 11/10/03 . chapter 5*puffs up proudly* I am the maker of the Glorfindel flags, waving them about most Glorfindel fics I have encountered since 2001. *grins* Great chapter. One thing though, not too sure if Goblins were actually elves as well. I believe it was only the orcs, but it is of no consequence! *grins* |
 Freya writes 11/9/03 . chapter 4hihi!
I really like your description of Asfaloth trying to get the elves' attention. It is very realistic. Do you have horses?
I'm very curious of how 'Asfaloth the Cunning Mind' will handle the acquaintance with his new master. Mwahahaha! |