Perfection in a different color!

I actually read this on your own website without realising it was up on ff.net. I just wanted to say I was truly captivated by the story. I loved all the details you included, and I can only imagine how much planning it must have taken to work in that prophecy (which was awesome) and make everything fit at the end. This is definitely going on my favourites list.

This is retarded as hell, officially. Too many inserted characters, too much plot. It's sporadic and all over the place. AT LEAST, EXPLAIN THINGS properly. Not to mention, establish WHICH person is WHICH. -.-

Beautiful...all I could think while reading it was: beautiful. Beautiful plot, beautiful charcaterization, arguments, story line, new characters. I mean it's one of the bestest fic I've ever read. This review is eleven years late but still valid, right! Thank you so much for ever writing this fic.

EPIC EPIC EPIC! A fucking diamond in the rough! I cannot express my love for your story.. its just.. just... one of the best well written, compelling, and just overall fucking awesome STORY IN ALL OF TIME! I love the way you portray all of the characters, I love everything. I know its not much, but know you have the eternal worship of a total nerd-hole :D luv you ;)

Some people like to call their fics "epic" because they are long, but this fic is EPIC in the most true sense of the word. I just finished reading and all I can say is "Damn! That was awesome!"

Dominion is definitely one of the most intense, imaginative, and unique AU Dragonball stories I've had the pleasure of reading.

There was only one thing that I wasn't particularly pleased with: the scattered Japanese vocabulary, seemingly there only because of some sense of Japanophilia. Even if I happen to know what the words mean, it annoys me because it breaks the immersion factor. I feel that one should stick to the same language unless it serves an important purpose in the story.

a fucking MASTERPIECE

do you understand that?

do you even comprehend the vast perfection of your creation?

i doubt you do.

though it wasn't until i finished it and went to your homepage did i find out the age of Bra had changed and things fully fell into place.

my one issue then is that Hikari Trunks and Goten were 14 and 13 right? that just seems too young to do the things they did.

personally i like to ignore the part where you mention Goten thinking about growing up/turning 14 [especially cause up till that point i had been picturing them and Bra their actual ages] and think of them closer to how they were in their second tournament and where Bra was a year older than Pan. [confirming that fact just for DBZ is a mess- /dragon_ball/bra.htm -just in case anyone wants to know, cause i was always confused by it] but that creates the problem for me of some reason always feeling Pan doesn't fit into DBZ at all.

so i say nix Bra being older than Pan and make Pan younger than both Bra and Marron. [its too weird that Vegeta and Bulma had their second child so close to Gohan's first anyway]

and that way the boys are naturally a little more grown up. i just couldn't believe their younger forms would have the level of maturity and composer they did.

noways...moving on from my age issue

a fucking masterpiece.

you connected all the dots, never lost track of your own story, and even remembered everything we had all forgotten and added extra magic infusing tidbits that made your words become real, in a way [for me at least] will stand alongside and perhaps even surpass DBZ as an official timeline.

after all that you must doubt that i am speechless.

but truthfully i am.

readers like me cant even being to dream of a story like this one.

or even begin to dream that they'd want so much to thank you for it.

This was one of the most captivating stories I've read. I am truly amazed by your storytelling ability. I was deeply moved by this story, particularly by Jouten (God). Words cannot adequately express the range of emotions I felt while reading this story.

great fic!

Oh, this chapter was great!

I felt so badly for Goku when he tried to call Chi-chi and I'm worried about her now too. I hadn't thought of the fact that Kuririn would be able to pass the news along.

I loved that Cumber suddenly saw a very small bit of what makes Goku a dangerous man and I look forward to watching that play out more.

You're really working an amazing plot here.

Wow. Amazing. It took me 2 days to read, but I enjoyed every minute of it. Awesome, awesome work!

Isn't this the same story that was posted on Dragonball Unlimited?

Sorry to give such a short reveiw, but awesome chapter as always.

I got goosebumps at the way Dende found the writing on the wall, I got them again at the end when you went through the thoughts of each of the Z Warriors.

But Bulma's especially troubled me.

I am worried about Bra and also about Goku. Vegeta or Trunks had better figure something out fast.

Great story!

Another brilliant chapter and so many answers finally given! Whe!

I love the fact that Goku instinctively grasped the answer. He does that a lot. *lol*

I loved the legend, the myth, and I'm impressed that you came up with that. Shape-shifting soul stealers.

I can't wait to see what's going on with Dende et al. and I love Reep. He's really quite cute and very tragic. I also was really drawn into Bulma's recording. That was tragic and very very well written. It gave me goosebumps.

Curioser and curioser. Excellent chapter! I feel bad for everyone involved, but I'm glad to see that everyone is starting to put things together. I can't wait to see what happens. And this makes more sense now, considering what Dende's friend said about Bulma as well.

Interesting... very interesting!