Good story. I hope you decide to come back and write more.

Wow! Nice sorting. I like the stare down with Lord Malfoy.

I really prefer Hedwig. Also the reason Hagrid was sent was so Harry wasn't allowed to know only what Dumbles wanted him to know. Notice that Hagrid didn't give him a Muggleborn kit or tell him or show him how to get on the train. Why not?? Hagrid wasn't an appropriate choice and would not have been sent except it was Harry.

Why leave him?? Why not take him then? Didn't she hear the word freak?? Is she going to send help??

plz update!

I understand your using Hargrid to pick him up, however you've forgotten that it was Dumbledore who picked up Tom Riddle and he was the Transfiguration teacher.

Hi, loving the story so far, am going to finish reading the rest tomorrow, just wanted to point out a slight mistake, or at least I think it's a mistake. At the try outs you've put 'there will be two groups of four', but when you've listed the names you've put 5 people in each group, and 5 people are mentioned in the descriptions later on (eg 'All right then, the first group is (1)Avery, (2)Capulet, (3)Jasmine Macnair, (4)Perks, and (5)Potter. The second group is (1)Zachary Macnair, (2)Malfoy, (3)Moon, (4)Parkinson, and (5)Zabini.')

I'm not flaming you or anything, I love what you've done so far, just thought you might like to know.

nice chapter :) but the last bit was confusing, what paper was that?

>But, alas, it stated specifically that the student was to bring an owl OR cat OR toad.

Then how do you account for Ron's rat? ;)

When are you going to update again, because I'm hooked! Shame really to see such a good piece abandoned, kindly tell me when you plan on updating again.

every story that has harry sorted into slytherin, has to have a dream about a turban telling harry to switch to gryffindor, mindless sheep the whole lot of you. so harry is meek and gets slapped around, then makes fun of dudley's clothes, obviously he is devious and couldnt be anywhere but a snake. i assume there was a book somewhere that told harry where his parents were sorted, or was that some devious deduction on the part of Harold?

I'm enjoying the story, but please fix your little biography of Snape in this chapter: After his death his most prized student, pupil progeny S.-. Snape. That's not even a sentence, and I think you were looking for prodigy (child genius) rather than progeny (child of).
Looking forward to the next chapter!

Good story, though why does Severous keep taking more and more points from his own house? Sure, its from Harry, but still? ...Keep up the good work and update soon!

Interesting story so far. :)
Be careful about using too much directly from the books (and I'm refering to story line, rather than text). It invites the reader to skim through sections that they know too well.
Also, it's Ceasar Augustus. 'Augusta' would, I believe, be the female version of the name.

Harry seems pansy why is that!!

The only spell he could think of was a freaking livatation spell and hes been at hogwarts for 2 months aready??

Psh i think its pitful that JK did that aswell more so that you used it aswell. Come be more creative, you put harry in slythrine so make him laern more, he wants to prov himself become more powerful then do it by having him learn spells that can be used in a fight, he was just attacked and yet he doesnt try and learn to defend himself!!