|Reviews for What Jack Wants|
| Leencz 12/2/06 . chapter 1
I still like your Yu-Gi-Oh stuff more.
I wonder if you'll ever read all these reviews.
Anyway, since the second installment has come out, your one-shots seem OoC for Will and maybe even Jack, but that doesn't mean they were not enjoyable.
That is one long, fucking sentence. I find it fucking. I don't think you should. It's length makes my head spin.
| Reina0 3/27/05 . chapter 1
Heh...cute! Thanks for breaking up the omnipresent & painfully predictable WillxElizabeth pairing. Gonna go read "An Everyday Trouble" now...mata...
| DeathsDragon 7/15/04 . chapter 1
um... I don't read many POC fics but I do honestly like this. I'm a big fan of slash and yoai. _ keep up the good work! I wanna read loads, and your writing style is true to the charactures
| SugarIcing 12/22/03 . chapter 1
oh my god. that was SO cool. seriously. that rocked! how the heck did you come up with that? cuz it made PERFECT sense. wow...
please continue their adventures!
you write like a pro/
| novembergrl 11/28/03 . chapter 1
Very interesting. Are you going to go for chp 2?
| Skyler VonDetton 11/5/03 . chapter 1
O!Holy crap that was AWESOME!PLEEZE DO A SEQUEL OR SOMETHING! U GET ALL MY KUDOS AND...o crap I have nothing worth value to give you. Oh well. Pardon my French, but you are one hell of a writer hon. And I call everyone hon so please dont freak.
Anyhow, that was so Johnny Depps portrayal of the great Captain Sparrow! More kudos! And well...thats how I kinda want the sequel to be like. Your story.
Well anyhoo, you rock and roll! Later days!
| obsessive 11/5/03 . chapter 1
its "Will...nice hat." at the end.
and "Elizabeth, it would never have worked out between us darling...I'm sorry."
| Fairady 11/4/03 . chapter 1
oops. how utterly embarassing. it has been too long since i last saw the movie. thank you jenn for pointing out my mistakes. i've fixed the name and title mispelling. it'll just take a bit to show the changes.
| Sparrows.Pirate.Wench 11/4/03 . chapter 1
lol, interesting _
o, i just noticed a few things (being the insane person that i am and noticing things like this because im so totally obsessed:)
its Commodore Norington
) jus' thought tha' might help _
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| The Second Geek 11/4/03 . chapter 1
wowerz, i likee, i hope you do another chapter, though judging by the end...prolly not aye?
i really liked it!
| CuriousDreamWeaver 11/3/03 . chapter 1
Well, well, well. Jack's far more devious than we all thought! LOL Talk 'bout bending fate... LOL!
Great fic, good use of emotive language and imagery. Really nicely done!
| Bananas51 11/3/03 . chapter 1
I'm gonna have to say, that despite your already admitted missed lines, this is a pretty decent little peice of work you've got here. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like it, very original. If you ever decide to take this idea and run with it, I'll be waiting to read it.
| melissafarlie 11/3/03 . chapter 1
greta start! keep writing! can't wait to read ur next one! Kelly