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VampireYumi
2009-08-03 . chapter 4
Woah, awesome!
I loved it so far!
Will you continue?

Yumi
Gorgaidon
2007-11-22 . chapter 4
ooh...interesting story; and i hope you'll update it someday
blooberrybree
2007-07-18 . chapter 2
Gahh...I just can't read any further.

1) Do you have any idea what real Japanese high school life is like? Punk bands never call themselves Flower Four in a country where eating too many sweets is unmanly. Stop watching anime.
2) Kamui is not a PMS-ing woman. Nataku is not a mild, pushoverish Subaru clone. And speaking of whom, in high school Subaru was a slight person with large eyes. He did not look like his X self.
3)Where on Earth is this story going?
4) Spellcheck and conventions check, please. This is written poorly.
dnd
2006-10-19 . chapter 4
Kamui Kinomoto-san! Please update your fanfic! I've just found this fic yesterday and it seems that u haven't updated it for years! >O< please update your story! let us know that you are still alive! thank you.
Firey Chronicles
2006-07-17 . chapter 4
...umm any chance of continuing? plz? ^^
Naomi
2005-10-26 . chapter 4
OMG! Sei-chan! Hurry up and finish this...please
yugiL
2005-08-25 . chapter 4
WoW this ish REALLY good!!
I admit I'm not a CLAMP fan and I barly know X/19...But the summary was too good to resist >.<
The only problem ish that I had to go to google to search for the pic of the character whenever a namme popped up v.v; Cause the only characters I know are Kamui,Fumma,Subaru,and Seishirou...;
ANYWAYS...I REALLY like the development between Subaru and Kamui~
Though I wish Fumma would be a little nicer...but then the fic would probably come to an end ne~~ ^^;;
Please update soon!!
Can't wait to see Seishirou^^-
Dark Reiko
2005-07-09 . chapter 4
Wonderful story! Hope you update soon, even though this story is on hold ^^
Catsmeowh44
2005-04-15 . chapter 4
aha it was cool, i can't wait for the next one! i love your fanfics there the best!
Redroseprincess678
2004-12-03 . chapter 4
hey, guess what? my mom FINALLY asks her friend to borrow it, but I didn't get to finish it. I didn't understand the plot much back then(I'm not really good at chinese even though i am chinese) but it was cool. But then i didn't get to watch the end, maybe i'll borrow it again. Anyway, i saw a bit of the sequel, where the leader of F4 lost his memories n fell in love with another girl. omg, my mom told me what happened and i thought "how sad, she(the main charac) is right there, watching the man who she loved(as much as she wun admit it) living n being happy with another." but she looked ok, which is weird. I guess maybe she thought "he doesn't like me, I knew he wouldn't. he looks happy and i don't want to ruin that for him." poor her. Hopefully, I can watch the rest of the show or you update more and i'll just read your spoilers ^-~ great chapter, keep writing
stranger12
2004-12-02 . chapter 4
Good story. I've read many Meteor Garden stories (Gundam Wing, Inu-Yasha, Sailor Moon...), but with X... Man... It's pretty interesting. I liked it. n_n I must tell you that it even made me think of writing a X story myself. It won't be just like Meteor Garden (or like the fics based on the latter), since I haven't watched it (only even realized it was a TV show after an author wrote it on his/her fic. Before that, I thought there was a plagerism thing going on... Stupid me... But now I know what the show's about, even if it's quite possible I never watch it...), because they haven't aired it here (Brazil), and don't think they ever will. What's the point, anyway? Anyway, I'm writing a fic on X and Meteor Garden, and had such inspiration because of you and your fic!! n_n The story will follow the show until a very early point, then it will go a TOTAL different way, with elements of the mangá, even. Wonder if I'll ever actually post it... Well, hope you carry on with you story. It's pretty damn good. n_n
Fanny chan
2004-05-30 . chapter 4
YO! WONDERFUL, LOVELY... well, i think ur other story is nicer... maybe coz' i absolutely HATE Hana yori dango... don't ask why. haha. Update soon. haha.
Bleu
2004-05-26 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh! A meteor garden parody!! I love it already. I'm so MD and X obsessed so this fanfic is my dream come true. Keep on writing.
sfenc
2004-05-25 . chapter 4
Hai, Kamui Kinomoto-san, I have to say, that this is the first fanfic, that I saw in my dream last nigt. That must be something in the way you wrote this chapter. Because I like it very much, though I like many over autors, but their art dont hunt me in my dream. If you wont, Ican say that my dream was about Kamui's test and red diplom (?) I dont know how you call it then all marks in University good... and how Shougo and Mizu hided his test in a safe place, so that it did not fall into X4's hands! I guess that is the best confirmation, that your fanfic is really great))
Oh, sorry for my English *pink cheeks*
Kamikakushi
2004-05-24 . chapter 4
Wai! You updated! Yay! ^^ *beams* I've been waiting so long for this to update. And yosh! Sei-chan is coming back! Alright! This is a great fic Ki...nomoto...um...*thinks what suffix to use* SENSEI! ^_^ Anyways, this is such a good ficcy. Always gives me a great laugh, and a joy to read. I can't wait for Keiichi and Sei-chan! But is Sei-chan going to be nice? I just can't see that. Anyway, update soon ne! ^^ *hugs Kinomoto-sensei* -_-; I'm so weird...
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