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Aw please continue this.

I love the story , It's so full of suspense... but there's only one we lil mistake, Hina's friend is called Rui not Rei , But Your Close Enough . I read every one of your YYH stories in one go Lol so now I'm rather sleepy , (please excuse me for not reading the rest of your fic but I don't know the anime/manga's Well...



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i love it, you are a good author

This was a beautiful story. Creative, and very touching. Thank you for writing it.

Awesome Fic. I've read your other stories that lead up to this one, they are are just so cool. Origenal story lines are a rare thing on this site, and you managed that somehow. Hope you don't suffer anymore pangs of writters block ;

kawaii!are you making a sequal?

hi gozilla i could really use your help writting a action fic...i suck at adventure stuff like that...thanx in advance

This is great! I love this story! keep up the great work!

An excellent story. please write more. -

No, it was good. Was that whole thing supposed to show that now there are 3 ki inside 1 body? If not, that's what I got out of it, so, yeah. _

(crying) so beautiful! Please continue this series! I love it! Good luck on the next one!

hi its me again. good story. though i found the end to be confusing. it might be better if you either put up another chapter or you can just explain the end to me ina review of mystory or whatever. anyway good story. hope my story turns out just as good as yours. hope you will write more stories about Hiei they are all very good. PLAESE WRITE MORE STORIES i REALLY REALLY liked them. anyway keep up the good work. See Ya!

It's not rubbish it's really really good I hope to see more fanfiction from you sorry for sounding like a teacher but your a good writer.

that was great im glad Hiei helped them that was so cool i liked the dream and everything this was agreat sequal