Love it. You capture Padme's emotions very well...

I loved every word.

This was a very moving version of Padme's memory in the meadow. I almost felt like i was the once she was speaking to. Very awesome. Look forward to reading more from you

BTW-don't be discouraged by negative feedback, most can be constructive, help you to improve, (though I'm not so sure about that other stuff you got...) Some people just have different tastes.
Keep up the great work
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A.A3: I couldn't trace your email address so I am posting my response here. Thank you for the feedback. I'm glad you were able to 'be' in the moment, so to speak. Star Wars is very visual and I'm glad you think my fic is too.

Um... this was horrible! I hate these gloppy, mushy stories! EW! EW! BTW, are you a kook? J/w...

that was so very sweet. it really transported me into another time, galaxy, life. it was Beautiful. write more.