I've seen that you've continued your "Only In Your Eyes Am I Worthy" fic. So, I'm hoping you'll also continue on your others fics, like this one, in the future. You've written some good stories here, and I consider them some of the best written that I've read. The DBZ section is not really my most read section, but reading your fics make it interesting. So, after you've finished with your Eva-fic, I hope you'll consider going into this one, and Dragonball V, again. If not, well, that's your choice as the writer.

great so far. plz dont let this story die. its too good to go unfinished. update soon.

good so far, keep it up

this is a great story and i hope gohan beats goku some miraculas way that he will gain extra powers, remember...hidden powers ya know when gohan gets ** and stuff

do us all a favour and update please

excellent first two chapters and interesting original concept please update! also am a big fan of Dragonball V.

Hey Babe, love your work, can't say anything else but keep at it. DBV was one of my fav. fanfics, this one looks great. One quest. You and the band ever going to do a North america tour? Would love to see you on stage.

Bob

what lemon?

i should also tell you that the swee trots only have effect for a month, so the 'piggy' trick wouldnt work at this point unless she fed him a new one recently.
maejinyokai as always, just tryin to help

this aint bad, but i wish you would work on your other fanfiction dragonball v some more, i like that one alot better and you hardly seem to work on it any more
To answer your question about the whole tienshanhan thing, when Toriyama originally made the manga in shonen jump back in the 80s in japan tien's formal name was tienshanhan and he was known by that because the other charactors didnt know him well enought to use familiar terms when talking to him, because that is proper edicate in japan, but when it was dragonball z (stands for zenkai by the way) he was closer with everyone else so they called him by an informal name, tien.
keep up the good work, and email me if ya'll have questions bout what i sed. (maejinyokai69@yahoo.com)

I have to say this is one of the better DB fics that still has action in it.

another good chapter i look forward to the next one. and as always i look forward to more of this andy your other stories. Ja-ne =(^_^)=

Very different. Its nice to see some originality and variation in fics. Based on how the characters where at the beginning of the Saiyan saga and before Radditz came to earth, this feels very accurate. I enjoyed it alot.

A DBZ Fanfic that puts the fun and action back into the stagnant DBZ genre that has of late, been filled with cliched angst, romance and pointless lemon fics.
Well done.
Update son.

It looks like an interesting story so far. Is 18 less powerful than she was in the series because Dr. Gero didn't feel the need to make her stronger since Goku didn't train with King Kai? Hope you write again soon. :)