Hey, great idea so far, a bit different that other time travel fics I've read. There is just one inconsistancy that I wanted to point out, though I don't think it really matters...
When Luke is trying to comferm Anakin's identity, he asks several questions, one of them whether Anakin had ever fought in the Clone Wars. Anakin answers yes, but he shouldn't even know what they Clone Wars are, I am pretty sure the battle on Genosis is the start of the Wars. Anyways, just thought I'd point that out. Off to finish your story!!
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The Golden Snitch

please write another chapter!
i'm getin real board!

please write another chapter!
what is Luke thinking of!1he's crazy!


:)

nice fic! please update soon

Okay, this is a great story so far with one of the most original ideas I've ever seen for changing things around (not sure if you personally subscribe to the dimension theory you outlined IRL, but I do happen to - very strange to see someone else describe it in detail). I know this review goes into your inbox, so please consider it a vote for you to CONTINUE THIS STORY UNTIL IT'S FINISHED! I understand about finding another fandom that completely sweeps all your interest, but there should still be time to spend on this; it's not like you suddenly developed a hatred for Star Wars. Anyhow, great job, but it will be greater if you ever finish it (I'm holding out hope because you didn't write "cancelled" next to the title in your profile).

Only on chapter three, but I love it so far! Can't wait to read "Heart of a Sith"

I'll be back on Monday to keep reading!
~Alien Roxi~

Hey, this is really good so far. I'm marking my spot so I can keep reading Monday.
Back later,
~Alien Roxi~

i've been following this story for so long, and what can i say? it's brilliant! i've never been so entertained by fanfiction before! please continue your updates. may the force be with you. lol

I'm really enjoying this - I hope you have time to update fairly soon, because I can't wait to see what happens next. The way you write non-evil Anakin is very interesting, and I love the relationship between evil-Luke and Vader. In fact scrtach that, I love Vader full stop. I forsee some interesting conversations with Han and Leia...

Peace out
~TSD

Joel, there aren't any Mary-Sues in this story. Had you continued to read past the 4th chapter you would see that Rajad was merely a plot device and had no role other than to get the Skywalkers where I wanted them. After that, she's gone. She doesn't appear again. It's hard writing both time-travel AND reality-skipping in a semi-serious fashion!

Sorry you didn't like the story. Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a review! ^_^ Hope you find what you're looking for elswhere.

~Shady

Oh jeebus! A mystical race who knows everything? LOL that's stupid. A magical race of Mary Sues. The whole reveal of Anakin's past, his stupid reaction, Luke's childish attitude, the whole OOCness of Luke and Anakin, and the unbelievable elements were bearable, but this mystical race of creatures who are going to be part of the story (Mary Sues are always like that, where has the originality gone?) is the last straw.

My advice to you - DON'T write new female characters in that are omnipotently magical and mystical. *rolls eyes* If it's a Luke and Vader story, just write about Luke and Vader. Don't bring in your Sues. *throws up on the mystical creatures*

Anakin can understand R2. R2 was his droid for years before Threepio and Artoo were given to Antilles.

Yay! An update! :D

wow and the plot thickens great job with this chapter but you can't just leave us hanging like this plz plz update soon!