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Reviews For: The Teaser Pony

Tari Roo
2006-04-03
ch 7,
abuseBravo! Magnificento!

Well done on a entertaining plot, excellent characterisation (including 'firefly' speak) and exceptional interaction between your characters. I particularly enjoyed Simon and Mal's final conversation in the epilogue and the underlying comparison between Barney and Mal (very well done).

Any plans for another firefly fic?
LesserKnown
2005-12-14
ch 7,
abuseThis was absolutly brilliant. The characters were spot on and the plot was wonderful.

Kudos.
xahra99
2005-10-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really liked this fic. There isn't a huge amount of good firefly/serenity fanfic out there. This one didn't go overboard on the Chinese swearing or the cowboy-speak, but it captured the flavour of the language used in the show quite nicely. I think the thing I liked most about this fic, though was the accurate potrayals of both medicine and horses-and the ending. The vision of the poor frustrated stallion leading his mares out is just too good to be true.
I realise from the post date that you've probably forgotten this fic even existed, but it's good and I'd read more* happily goes off to search for mroe fic by the same writer*
babies-stole-my-dingo
2005-08-08
ch 7,
abuseI'd forgotten you wrote this til I came across it, browsing--I always wanted to read it, and now that I've seen the series it makes sense for me to. Anyway, that's my long-winded way of saying I finally got to read it and enjoyed it thoroughly. Excellent characterization, great story, read just like an episode. Very nice. :-)
kewl-gurl-175
2005-06-15
ch 7,
abusethat was a good story. tell me if you have written anymore.

2004-11-23
ch 6, anon.
abuse*I love this story*

it's so good, I can't even read to the end and review it all in one go, I have to stop at the really good chapters. I mean, you even gave a happy ending for the horse *sniff*
that, and it all played out so perfectly, what with the explanation for the fed not arresting simon etc. etc.
like, wow.

2004-11-23
ch 5, anon.
abuseall I can say is;

‘Mal, you cost me money, because while I was in bed with a client...I cried your name.’

Well, Ok, not all. This chapter made me laugh *3 times*
It made me gut wrenchingly sad or nervous at least 4 times.
It's a really, really cool story.
I'll be reading on to the end now.
Ande
2004-08-04
ch 7, anon.
abuseThis story was fabulous! Devoured it the first time, than had to go back immediately and read it again. Loved the Simon and Kaylee interaction, but they still didn't get to kiss! Poor kids. Really enjoyed Kaylee's beliefs of love and loyalty in the epilogue. Very true to her character and shows why Simon's feelings for her continue to grow. Hope to see more S/K from you soon. (hint, hint) :)
Roseveare
2004-04-27
ch 1,
abuseI thought this was excellent, but then I knew it would be. I actually did a little happy-dance at my computer when I was searching ff.net and saw you'd written Firefly fic. :)
Lauren
2004-03-02
ch 7, anon.
abuseYay! Excellent story.
Logan13
2003-12-22
ch 4,
abuseCool story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
alliterator
2003-11-05
ch 7,
abuseWow. What an ending. This is not just a great story, but a nice tribute to Firefly as well.
Didn't see the Amelia doublecross coming and was surprised, but you tied it all in and it made sense, so yay!
I loved all the flashbacks and Mal's line that he can't even kill someone without getting insulted. You've certainly got his dry humor down.
Oh, and Wash with hish dinosaurs? High-larious!
alliterator
2003-11-03
ch 2,
abuseOOh. Interesting. I can't wait to see how this turns out.
I think you have all their voices absolutely correct (even Book's, which is the hardest I think).
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