This is good; I like the way you introduce a new character by naturally folding her into the storyline. I'm looking forward to the next part.

Hopeless Sue!

Haha... 'Ello people, it was I who wrote this story. Then I lost the password to this account.
Anyways, I wrote this a long tome ago- way before I realized that people don't really WANT to read stories about a chick based on me going into my favorite TV show and having my favorite character fall in love with her...*blink* Though it does make a nice personal day dream...^.- *cough*, Anyways, sorry to anyone annoyed by this, hee hee.

This is a really good story, hope to read more!