aww. tis sad, but very good in the same.

Ok, this was short and somewhat depressing but very well written.

Just one tip, and this has nothing to do with the story, change your prefences so you can accept anon reviews

(goes to hug Smith but reads fic) Aww but I wanted to hug him! If I hug him I'm gonna get shot? Oh well I still think it's worth it! (hugs Smith, gets shot) It was a cool little fic and it was worth it (dies)

Wow. Great fic.

You do an awesome job of bringing your character to life in such a short time span.

I'd love to see more of your fics on the Matrix.

ooh! that was great ! please write tons more like this; great and short!

thanks

~carm~