Wow. This is really beautiful. it's nice to know there are other people out here who have heard of real books.

*please note that I am absurdly proud of the fact that I've reads books upon books by e. e. cummings*

who cares if i got them about 12 years ago and only started them now... at least i got around to them!

fluffily deep, as always. i commend you.

Oh, boys. You've got Lee's tone down - the polite diction, the refreshing directness ("I like you. Want to be with me?") the feeling of hope and joy despite all adversity. Character study with a side of romance, just the way I like it.

O.o *is careful to wear pants instead*

Someone wrote a poem based on e. e. cummings for our literary magazine... it made NO sense... but this does.

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I still love you. _

I-love-you!

Hahahah, seriously, your fics damn rock! This one is no exception. You describe emotions and thinkings and stuff so very well I can't help but love you XD

You kick ass! Keep up the awesome work!

my friend referred this to me, and i'm so glad she did.

this story really shines! I fell in love with every single sentence inside.

can only give a "thumb up" yay! nice guy pose

*faints from the sheer beauty of it all*

This is so lovely. I adore this fic. Your writing style is gorgeous and the mood is perfect. Ethereal, almost... Keep up the good work. _

omg wow... Brilliant. Just brilliant :) i love your style of writing, and you did a beautiful job on this! yay for Lee/Neji ! (and the other way around)

Gorgeous, in small words.

yes! that is my favorite poem of e. e. cummings! )) i love your style of writing. it's quiet and the mood is strange, a little melancholy, a little i dunno. please email me back your writing style leaves such an imprint )) maybe we can talk on aim.

I like how you made a point out of purity not only being pure of dark influences. I think people forget that sometimes. I'm not too familiar with Neji or Lee, but I liked this story nonetheless.

Beautiful. Very beautiful. I especially like the ending where you added that "chain of events" to describe life's actions and reactions...the girl and the flower, the boy and his friend, the teacher and possible Hokage. Very, very beautiful. Write more! Ever think about a Sasuke/Naruto one?

This is a beautiful piece, showing fascinating insight on possibility, caring, and goals in life. The writing style is fluid and peaceful, with a sort of ethereal/phantasmal grace. Great job! -

Wow.. A nice peice.. Sounds good.. The flow of the story goes really well. I hope to read more of your work..

And here I got first review props...Anyways, I love the flow of your story. A proper story inspired by Cummings; each idea seems almost isolated, yet comes together as a whole very well. If I had more sleep, I think I could write a better review. The poem fits perfectly. It makes me want to finish Milton and Dickenson things. Because fanfic, too, should be like literature.