^ _ ^ I like Karen's diary entries! You get to see the whole story from another point of view! That's so cool... You should keep writing these! I like them a lot! :)

another look into the mind of our beloved Karen! excellent! finally done! now on the alert list you go and on to the next board member!

aw! that was so cute! and a nice break from the darkness of hearts! one more to go!

this is definately a nice look into Karen's head. it also adds a little insight. very nice.

Hey, it's not bad as you said! Actually it's pretty gppd except Karen likes cooking.

Wow, this is a really neat story. I aplaude your use of language. Karen is a complex character to write about, so I really congratulate you on your writing. Even though Karen isn't my favorite to marry in the game (I don't like her breaking eggs and I know how to get her to NOT leave, marry Kai and she gets pregnant ^_^ ). She is a complex character that takes a lot to delve into, and you have in a way mastered it. *aplaudes*
Wonderfully done!

Nice compliment to your awesome story! This gives a great sort of insight on Jack and the whole scenario.

Wow. This is great :D! Gambatte.

yay, another chapter! great job! sorry i haven'te been reading quite as much lately. . .bad me, i know.
great story! normally with two stories based on one, it gets horribly repetetive, but I'm glad you're avoiding that. i've always hated having to read the same dialogue twice, and this is just like a little memory refreshment. just remember to keep 'haven' quite a few chapters ahead of this.
keep it up! and thanks so much for the reviews - my malevolent characters come from getting in touch with my own murderous character from our last play. it's kind of scary, but i now understand and relate with the inner workings of a killer's mind. ah well. anyway, that was off-topic. thanks so much, and don't stop with your writing!

This is really, really good. Definately this and your 'Haven' fic are two of my favorite stories on this site. Great job! (And yes, I do read ALOT, so my opinion about that is worth something, at least. Besides the fact that I'm a writer myself!) And I hate being that egotistical, but...ah well. Just don't think I'm some guy who's all stuck up and think's he's the greatest person in the world. I'm not. These are awesome stories, and I hope you'll get the next chapter out soon. (But what DID you mean by 'UNPLANNED DIRECTION'?!?! Wah!) Bye!

An update!

hey! Good story you got going here! YOu need to write more really soon! Thankies! Bye

That was coolio! Please review my story!

It's nice! Yay!

I'm liking it so far. shows a lot of details the game just skimmed over.