 nobi-nobi 2006-12-08 . chapter 8 Please update! This story is really great and you should continue. It seems you haven't updated in a while. I don't know why, but try to continue this story even is your busy. One thing I tell all the fanfic writers, keep writing even if you don't get reviews. Lots of people read but don't comment. So update this great story! |
 WindSPun 2004-07-17 . chapter 7ok, there are some seriously messed up horsey details in here. you don't appear to be familiar with horses so let me try to educate you:
sorry if i sound like a know-it-all brat or what but even if you rip up two entire pairs of jeans there is no way in the world that you could possibly make 100 feet of "rope"
since that left the main character in shorts, why was she still riding? you simply do not ride with shorts. ever.
also, why in heck did she start playing piano if there was lightning and her horse was outside? that's just stupid.
and even if that happened, how could she hear Aegnor running on grass from inside? especially if the walls "swallowed sound" or however you put it
and it's not running either. it's cantering or galloping or even jogging if he's a western.
not running. |
 xorie5 2003-11-08 . chapter 8great story!! write more soon!! |
 Kitten 2003-11-08 . chapter 8 Ya gonna tell us what that means? Cause... ya know... I'm sorta confused. But this story seems really cool so far. |
 Lobo Diablo Lone Wolf 2003-11-06 . chapter 4keep goin', is it like a Ringwriath after her or what? |
 NanoBear 2003-11-05 . chapter 6This story is too cute. I love the way its going. I hope that Erin gets to be with Legolas...i find it very cute with stories lile little mermaid...mute babe gets with prince...sigh..ok ok..im rambling...keep it going! |
 oOoFruitLoopsoOo 2003-11-05 . chapter 4I'M CONFUZZELED! WRITE MORE! I WANT TO UNDERSTAND! PLEASE! |
 BreeJ 2003-11-05 . chapter 4 this is good i like it, i cant; wait till she meets osme of the characters form the book, update soon. |
 BraveLion 2003-11-05 . chapter 4ElvenEyes: It just keeps getting better and better
Sundiata: You know, it would have been cool if she left the other leg long instead of evening it out
ElvenEyes: Matbe you would like our story too. It's called Scepter of Amion. Not trying to sound bias, but it's a great story
Sundiata: If you check us out don't forget to review. |