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Z
2006-08-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow... so beautifully written and created. I just so love your character portrayal of Ash, Eiji and Shorter. Just right and balanced in strengths and weaknesses. None one negative tone.

I like the warm and relaxing atmosphere of laughter and happiness, even in the midst of danger and conflicts. It's that kind of attitude that they should better adopt, to keep themselves sane and alive in life. Like a protective cocoon against terrifying cruelty.

I do wish for the cold and tough Ash and his strong and sweet Eiji to be together forever after having overcome some struggling doubts and insecurity.

Thank you for this poignant chapter! =)
RavenSilverKat
2006-05-28
ch 1,
abuseWhy "suddenly"?! Ack! No! That can't be teh end, can it?!
Shindou404
2004-03-27
ch 1,
abusethats a really cool fic, i loved it!
Cornflake Miko
2004-01-21
ch 1,
abuseI read this on some other website quite a while back. And I'd just like to say that I really enjoyed it.
firia
2003-11-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love Shorter to pieces, so I truly enjoyed this story! The humor was very nicely done! Thanks for writing this!
Uozumi
2003-11-19
ch 1,
abuseThat was better than the last one, I have to admit. Yet, it was so good! This was just what I needed!

Thanks so much for your dedication to this series! It brightens my day!

Uozumi
Kay
2003-11-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseOkay. Definitely want to write BF fiction again. *twitches* Although it makes me nervous, considering how well you've accomplished it... but one must try! ^^

I loved this. It was sweet and light-hearted, just a glimpse of the good times those three had together. Great job portraying Shorter and Ash's friendship, as well as Eiji's character. Everything was awesome. I especially loved Ash's little jealous wondering about whether Eiji had a lover, and why exactly he cared. (Hee hee, I know why, A~sh!) Good stuff! This writing was excellent as always, with a great tone. YAY! Thank you so much!
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