Oh, this was so sweet I almost cried! A little surreal, a different twist on the familiar. A unique piece!

Wow, this is...pretty darn amazing. A 'dark' side to all the craziness and funny stuff. Poor Makoto...

Aw. Sweet, nicely written and surprisingly original.

Such a beatiful, moving story about... a server?

You are most definately unique, I'll give you that. I really wish chapters had a bit more in them, but what is there is lovely. You gave Makoto-rin such a sad, lonely existence, I nearly cried for her. Another one for my faves list.

Question: What do you think Largo's relationship is with Makoto, since, techinicly, it is his company that owns her?