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| EternalSleep 2008-10-09 ch 8,  | abuseI loved the story. I have an idea for a sequal if you don't already have one. After they disappeared at sea you should have them arive in lucy's world (england) and see her families reactions. |
| Jasper Hale Fan 2008-08-05 ch 8, | abuseWonderful story! I really liked it! --AMS |
| lucy2350 2007-12-06 ch 8, | abuseWow! I loved this story, I heart Lucian, and you just made me love Lucian even more. Great job! |
| I-Poke-Penguins 2007-06-19 ch 8, | abuseSo cute! I love good fluffy endings. |
| Sessho's Lover 2007-06-16 ch 8, | abuseThat was really cute. I love this pairing. |
| Momo love love stories 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abusePerfect! |
| TheObsidianPhoenix 2007-02-01 ch 8, | abuselovely. beautifully written with just the right amount of poetic language. the pairing is full of chemistry and with jus tthe right amount of sparks to keep the romance giong withought it being cheesy. i would have liked a little more smut though. but this story is beautiful. a real triumph, this and dawn trader retold. keep up the good work and i hope to see mre of this pairing soon. |
| aspirer 2006-05-31 ch 8, | abuseaw, sweet story :) i heart lucian |
| Sher 2006-03-31 ch 8, | abuseBeautiful story. =) |
| RandyFan 2006-01-07 ch 8, | abuseGreat! Awesome! =D Very good, deep story. More please! :D |
| Jaid Ziaen 2005-12-15 ch 8, | abuseThis was really cute. Like... REALLY cute. =) I enjoyed it ever so much - thank you. I liked your portrayal of Caspian, so many times he's just... Caspian!Sue. And Lucy was just so sad. The ending was hopeful too. =) ~ Melody |
| ionalama 2005-11-09 ch 8, | abuseThat was soo cute I love it! It is a much better ending, I always thought they should me together. I hated that random women who he fell in lovee with for no reason. Much better this way. well have to go check out if u have any other stories. Will review them! luv Iona |
| starstruck26 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abusethat was very sweet, nicely written :) |
| centaursrockmysox 2005-07-05 ch 8, | abuseC.S Lewis would have a heart attack, but hey, I'm not him! THAT was sweet, really really sweet. ( I'm a girl, thought I'd clarify ;) ) AW. *Tara* |
| Terriah 2005-06-27 ch 8, | abuseyey! |