i really liked this! its one of the best i've read besides kakashi and some of his other "friends" from naruto. i would like it if something akward happend in ehr present like maby uh i dunno... *cough kenshinXernocough* but thats jsut my sick 17 year old mind speaking for me .

Heey! Anywho, seeing as i cannot e-mail you, i will answer your question here. Ahem. Rin the the girl that, when she was eight, met Sesshomaru. Then she was killed by wolves. Sesshomaru used Tetseiga to bring her back to life (Yes, it's really in the anime...and the manga). Ever since then, she has been faithful to Lord Fluf- I mean, Lord Sesshomaru.

Cool. Thats a really good story. Here's an idea: have something wierd happen in the present, and have Erno connect it to something in the past. Just a thought. Update soon!

I think you should drive deeper into Erno's past than she'd like to. But that's just me. Update!

-YG