Yeah, it was good. I write poetry myself, that was random. I ran out of words to say. Hope to read more from you!

Like a folk song that would have been sung years after the war ended. I like it- especially the last part. Poor Helen. She was only doing what Aphrodite made her do...

I loved it! I bet that's exactly how the villagers felt, but I didn't think it was a parody. Still, it was cool and you should write more poerty!!

hmm. Maybe your right. I don't write poems or stories that happen to be funny, or at least I don't try to. Wait, my tone of voice? hmm, I wasn't meaning to have a tone at all... Oh well. Maybe a sarcastic voice... Because there is no such thing as the 'most beautifull woman in the world,' it's sad if someone thinks that.

Eh, not to sound cynical or anything... but I found that more to be a humor/parody rather than parody...sorry, it was just your tone of voice.
BTW, the war IS all that woman's fault! How dare she cause Odysseus(sp?) to leave home just for that stupid war! Ugh!
(marches off, steam coming from ears)