 madhatter 2007-05-18 . chapter 3 YOU ARE WONDERFUL JUST FREAKING WONDERFUL! KEEP WRITING BABE! |
 Jess Ishtar 2006-07-24 . chapter 8update soon! |
 Elisabpshady 2006-07-22 . chapter 8OMG! this story is just GREAT! PLEASE UPDADE SOON! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN! |
 Pearl3 2006-07-22 . chapter 8GASP!? what the heck, update! |
 too lazy to log in 2006-07-22 . chapter 8 hihih I really like this story it's so cute and sad and it makes me want to cry but i like it anyways.
continue please |
 moonsaiyan4 2006-07-21 . chapter 7 OMG! I can't believe you ended the chapter like that!! Why would Bulma betray Vegeta like that? It doesn't sound like something she would do; she must be tricking Yamcha or something for payback, that has to be it! And of course she's pregnat with Vegeta's child and not Yamcha's right? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I HAVE TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS! |
 Jess Ishtar 2006-07-20 . chapter 7WHAT DID JUST HAPPEN? |
 moonsaiyan4 2006-07-19 . chapter 3 Ah how cute!! You have to update this story as soon as possible!! I can't wait to find out what happens next. You're a great writer; keep it up!! |
 Vickychan 2005-06-30 . chapter 6AW!! thats so cute!
o but two typos ^_^; sorry. you put "bulled" instead of pulled and "Vegitasie" instead of vegetasei >_< ek! i hate saying stuff like this
but anyway that was SO CUTE!! aw vegeta... lol i like naja :P you should bring her back and make her kill bulma so vegeta can be with naja again
^_^; sorry, im insane... |
 Oozaru Angel 2005-05-26 . chapter 5It's good. Not the best B/V I've read, but a decent one. Can you try making the chapters a it longer? From what I've read in the summary, you could have probably put the first five chapters into 2, maybe even one.
But it's good. And as I say with all my precious B/V's... UPDATE! |
 Lortenian 2005-05-16 . chapter 5Oh, please keeping writing it! OW! >:) I likey muchly! |
 Lortenian 2005-05-16 . chapter 4He he he! I likey muchly. |
 Thanatos Nemesis 2005-01-24 . chapter 4Very good. Update soon please. and as for the no time in the school year... I know it! *gestures to her mountains of books...homework...and other crap* |
 Bishounenlvr 2004-11-01 . chapter 4aww how sweet... |
 Vickychan 2004-10-30 . chapter 4LOL!! Okay all of that chapter was just hilarious I'm gonna quote now:
"Now, now, now, Veggie, I'm a married woman."
"Thank Kami I showered today"
"Oh, if only I still had a tail!"
LMAO!! They get funnier as the chapter goes on, you gotta write more of this stuff! :P |