I dont normally read songfics, but I thought 'what the hell?' This was pretty good for a first ficcie. I liked the song. It was fitting.

A little side note, though. Dont review your own stories, even if no one ever reviews them. I noticed you did this on another fic too. It looks rather cheap. And if it looks cheap you look desperate. And with desperation in the air, people won't take your fic seriously. Dont put yourself down, either. You're better than that, you really are. Besides, do you really want 'pity reviews'? Genuine ones are far better.

With that said, I'd just like to say that this was nice and I rather liked it. A suiting song for a heavy situation and not at all cheesy. Well done.

Love Always,

FR

Hallo!

This was fantastic!, The song went relay well with your fic espcally, the part with "you can't push it underground, you can't stop it screaming out" when Wolf was sinking into the snow. And "He stood over her looking sharply into her teary pain filled eyes as she lay there in a bloodied mess.

"You're something beautiful, a contradiction" cought my eye. I know this was 1st song fic and you did a 10 out of 10 job of it.

Keep it up!

Fox

ok i dunno why but my fic looks lonely so im reviewing it lol! i no its not very good but i dont write much plus it was my first ever song fic!