i was on the edge of my set during the battles...

This was a very good fanfic. Sad but good. Please write more

I absolutely loved this. It's possibly the best Star Wars fic I've read so far (I just started reading SW fiction, specifically Jaina-centric, a week or so ago and have since been on a mission to read everything I can find). I'm currently reading the sequel on

Thanks for writing!

Aw. gorgeous I like that there was a twist but things were still happy.
~Priya

Nice work. Little nasty having the kid blind, but if you had too...

Good to see people agree with me about getting Jaina and Jag together!

I see Mara's own experiance acted as a guide here...

I guess you wrote this before Ep3 right?

Great chapter. Sad but also true in life

I swear to god, if I were the editor for the Star Wars Galaxies Expanded Universe series, I would pick this book up right then and there. It's wonderful. It's past the limitations of "fanfiction" and should rightfully earn it's place amongst the published Star Wars continuations.

It's been fabulous dahling. =)

Aw. "
Between you and Jag and those two Grandpas, the idiot won’t know what hit him.”
The reunion between Mara, luke, and Ben was perfect. I think I would like to see a companion story based on those.

"“From mother’s holos.”
V. cute. :) I will read the rest l8r.
I am kinda said it is finished.

That's so sweet!
I can't begin to believe that this is the end. I've been reading your story for a very long time, now!
Thank you for this, they were so real, Jag, Jaina, Jacen and Kyp. It was wonderful to read about them again. I liked so much Dark journey and all.
May the Force be with you.

Wait, what do you mean the end? Like the end the end? Oh. I've been following this story for so long that I can't imagine not checking for an update every time I go online.

Its really an amazing story though. You have held all the characters the whole way through, and it was a really nice way to finish. (What would be even nicer would be a sequel though, hint, hint)

It's kind of funny, the fact that you have this story about Jaina's daughter being blind, and I'm planning one about a daughter of Jacen, also AU, who is force-blind.

Anyway, I just wanted to say that this is an amazing end to an amazing Fanfic.

Wow.

What a ride it's been. I've laughed, I've cried (in fact I'm brushing away a few tears at this moment) and I've been on the edge of my seat throughout. And even at the end, you've managed to out and out surprise me.

I normally try to pick out one thing that I've enjoyed above all, because I know, as a writer, I like to know what really worked (and what may not have done), but honestly, there isn't one thing I can pick out. This whole story has been a fantastic read. You've drawn the characters beautifully, you've created a compelling and tightly woven plot and you've rounded it off in fine style.

Thank you.

Great chapter! The writing was amazing,cant wait for another update.

Aww! They're all so cute! I can imagine Han Solo and Soontir Fel spoiling Keira rotten alright! Poor kid.

Aw. This is such a wonderful story! Add on.