Beautifully written. A view of what could have been if different choices had been made. It puts the Saiyuki boys in a different light.

~Emi [^^]

whoa, lowd the frist chapter the most

Wow. You lent a whole new meaning to the phrase AU. It's hard to tell which story was my favourite - the amazing thing was that you managed to change all their reactions to situations without changing their characters - Hakkai's passive attitude, Sanzo's weird form of sympathy - even Goku's desperation. I'm truly impressed. Keep up the good work!

Woof. This definitely caught my attention, for sure. I wasn't going to read it, but I'm very glad that I did. The words flowed, and I thought your writing style was beautiful.

Each of these definitely gave me something to ponder. So many 'what ifs' that float around, really makes you wonder what would have happened if things had happened differently. It was interesting to see a different take on what might have been.

Good story(ies). I think I'll be favoriting this one. ^_^

That was really good, but what do the chapter titles mean?

Freakish and brainscrambling...

In my ignorance - could I be so bold as to ask the meaning of the title?

Anyway...you've been gone too long...it was good to see this today. Thank you for your insights.

If things went, just, a little bit differently.
I get it now.
A bit overused theme, but good writing none the less. I'll be waiting ofr more.
_melissa

Okay, I don't know this title, but I WISH I did.
Such a good chapter. The ending's kind of creepy, but a good creepy. Like, what if he did decide it would be easier without the limiter?
_melissa

Isn't that German for pleasure at the misfortune of others? I heard this song, you see...
Quite fitting.
This is prominsing to be quite dark.
Excellent.
_melissa

re-reading this...they are still beautiful in that chilling dark hair stand on end and goosebumps way.nice - zan

chilling - and conceivable, which makes them all the more chilling. i like your style - disjointed in the right way, detached when it needs to be. eagerly awaiting the next piece.

So G did not save the beautiful bleeding creature because
1. it either did not smell right enough (not like Tenpo at his most unwashed) or did not smile psychotically enough,
2. G was not in the right mood due to being given a less than perfect apple that day
3. G was not in the saving-bleeding-bishonen-mood due to the question about hair-dye...

or the beautiful bleeding man would have expired from apoplexy anyway due to being asked 'are you dead?' (which is like being asked 'are you asleep')

So we don't get the epic journey, and are sadder ppl for it (stolen from the LOki recaps gel).
When is Sanzo's turn?

I like yr way of writing. Still missing Sanzo Update.

Sheyikes.
O,O
No, I mean, seriously, O,O! As in, kind of speachless with the ow, ow, ow, try again, *please,* Kanzeon, you missed.
And Goku, ack, gulp, goodbye, world. I *remember* that laugh.
And I'm really not sure which of Hakkai's revenges was crueler, the blood or the bitter watching in the shadows.
And again, just for emphasis, yigods.
O,O
In case it wasn't clear, nice.
Of course, I mean that in the most creeped-out-of possible ways.

no offense, but i REALY dun understand. But the ones i did, they were good.