Stupid Ed. Chris' already ** off you moron! You don't have to insult him even more! Now how's it like to be DM-ed by Orochi himself?
Great chapter! Chris is one of my favorite KOF character! Please update it! Next time use K'. I want Ed to be Chain Driven!

Heh serves Ed right I don't like the sound of the show and Chris is my all time favourite the King of Fighters character
PS Judging by the fact this fic is in 2003 isn't Chris 20 by now?

LOL!
Chris is no ordinary kid!
He's one of the Four Heavenly Kings of Orochi, as well as his vessel.
Don't mess with Chris!

Hahaha, well this is certainly funny! lol I really liked this one...but Joe gettin' beat up? Not so cool. Though...it was kinda funny. Well, this was awesome...are you gonna make any more? O.o Later, peace! :D

You made 4. I think. Maybe. I don't know. This is funny. And, Joe is a **, because King is the greatest Muay Thai figher in the world. Oh. Kasumi should go the Good Burger and try to get some food. That would be so funny.

Gotta catch them All!! Pokemon. Poor Ash but hey I do not like the pal so bash him all you want. BTW who are your favorite characters

HAHAHAH. funny funny. Great fic. I want a good burger and some nacho cheese with that order pal.
Bring it to me

I agree I don't like Joe either. Ed is really stupid and funny. I really like your story. Keep going. You should have Kyo or Billy Kane enter or some thing.

Ramon: Funny story.
Sunny: If you want to see a funny Maxima/Diana fic, check out our fic called "a bomba"

^_^ This fic's great! Pure cheesy humour!
You should do Billy or Yamazaki! I can just picture Yamazaki trying to kill Ed, but the cashier still gets the better of him.
Please continue!

Suggestion : Don't just include KOF characters. Include other SNK characters as well ! (Other than Samurai Shodown or Last Blade. That would be out of time). But, for the next visitor, it should be K' or Iori.

Damn... That was a great chapter. Do Iori!

Ramon: cool fic so far.
Suuny: yeah, we loved this one with Ash.
Air Jay: Yeah, now do one chapters with Angel.
Alandra: SHUT UP AIR JAY!
Air Jay: What?

Haha! Ash nailed Ed!

LMAO! That was classic. That was wicked with Chris turning into Orochi. Continue on! The next customer should be K' or Iori.