Finally! A SetoMako pairing. That's a new one and I love it! I guess it makes sense that Makoto would be Sakura's sister and all. Very many similarities between them, yes.

I can just imagine Touya chasing after Kaiba for being near his 'sister'. And I can also imagine Sakura, Yukito, Nakuru, and Mako trying to stop him. Yeah, well...great story!

love tje story

XD I loved your Card Captor Sakura/Sailor Moon fan fic, and I love this one, too! I absolutely adore the idea of Sakura and Makoto being sisters, and sometimes I've gone with it in some of my own fan fiction (but not any of the stuff I've posted). Kaiba/Makoto rocks my sox!

^_^ WAH! This was really good. Too bad its so short!

This story rocked! lolz, it was just the greatest!! lolz, Im sorry that this review isnt very long.. I just didn't really.. well that would be kinda rude to say I just didn't feel like it, but meh, what are you gonna do? *shrug* lolz, well I just wanted to say that I loved this story, and I wish that there was another chapter... but I can tell not, since this one was labeled "Epilogue" lolz. Well have fun writing your other stories, and try to get the ones on hold off! lolz, Ja!

I did not read the rest bad me. Anyways it was sweet. Gosh you are a teaser. It was kinda weird about Seto even being aa 'little' nice. I guess I like him being a cold bastard. Lol! Great job Vash-Chan even though I'm a little confused, but whats new. I am ALWAYS confused.

i love, how you write, it just seems to flow together perfectly. Even though the chapter was long by most standards of what people post on this site, it seemed way to short. Keep up the good work Vash-chan! Can't wait to see what you put out next!

YEAH!! excellent story though a bit short. An amazing story, I really agreed with your second point.

Hm, you have a soft spot for bad guys huh? LOL. I think more or less likely, this is a multicrossover to me though. Pure sweetness, probably a hint of lemon might do the trick.

Wai! That was very cute. A rather unique combination of shows, but they all blended really well together. Keep up the good work!

Impressive! You write really nicely and I rather enjoyed this. Sakura and Makoto being sisters was unexpected, yet a very good idea. Mokuba and Sakura would make good friends, but I'm a Syaoran/Sakura fan and am glad you didn't make them any more than that. I think Seto was IC, as the other characters were too. You kept his character and also showed his gentler side, which was very good.

The only thing is Sakura called Seto "Seto-san", but in all versions in YGO everyone except Mokuba calls him Kaiba. It was understandable for Makoto to refer to him as Seto since they knew each other in the orphanage, but why Sakura?

That's all I have to say.

~Aisu

I like it! Even though Kaiba was a little different. Well he may be based off the show. I really don't know. Well I am suprised you are coming out with new works. I need to get off my lazy butt and update and revise things. I am just so lazy and a little upset so it has been really trying with me right now. Well nice work and all.

Lol, this is cute

Seto was really in character. Good job. In the anime you can see a gentle side when he's with Mokuba. I'm glad you linked your other story to this (or at least added Sakura in). Her and Mako-chan look alike and are really...nice. ^__^ The Seto/Mako dialogue was good too and the imagry used to describe her feelings made it more...real. I'd like to see this two-shot continued since the mood was interrupted by Seto's cell. It would be nice to see Sakura or Mokuba have a plot to get them together, starting with the descruction of an interrupting cell phone. *evil laughter*

-Sarien

I guess this is more like an Yugioh/Cardcaptors/Sailor Moon in the mix since Li and Sakura were in here. Nice one shot, I dunno pretty much, Seto reminds me alot of Heero Yui in some form. Seto could pretty well go with anyone, of course not including Usagi **. >_> I tend to be more open-minded with any Jupiter pairings there is.