the storyline is realy very cute.
however, i feel as if all the characters are a bit ooc. except for maybe ukyo shampoo and kodachi.
mr. tendo & ranma's dad, and nabiki would never act so calmly if ranma told them about his feelings for akane, i think. XD
and i guess ranma is a bit over the top.
but all in all, it's a really cute story!

It was a cute story, although it did take some interesting turns...

well i don't know how long this story ended. I just read todaY all ten chapters and i liked.
it was nice and entertaining, i couldn/t stop reading until the end. you did a great job. the end was fine for me. if you keep going writing another chapter of this it would lost the meaning of title.
it was fina and well adapted to the plot. i like a lot.
i hope you keep writing i would love to know any other fanfic you wrote. congrats

I really liked this story! Congrats on finishing it, and keep up the hardwork!

~Kohana

So romantic I love it:)

This was such a great story I was so sad when it ended. Nothing lives forever though. I hate endings they just remind you that tomorrow everything is just a memory and you'll never get to expierence it again. Im gonna make myself cry. Great Story glad you continued it.

The descriptions are well-written, and the chaos of the Ranma-verse is there. However, I still find Ranma and Akane a bit out of character. I can imagine Ranma taking care of Akane, but not quite this tender -- a little more awkwardly and secretly is his style. Also, Akane really isn't that brutal to him (in the manga at least). As for Shampoo... I could see her doing something that stupid and desperate in the beginning of the manga series, but not later on. She knows better than to directly attack Akane in front of Ranma -- she would have lied her way out of the situation.

Yipe! It happened! I lurved reading this fic, you're a really gret author! Please, continue writing! ^_^

It's very good. I like it. The ending is good too, don't be so modest!

It's a great concept, but Akane and Ranma are a bit OOC. Akane wouldn't be that mean to Ranma, even if she was feeling horrible and sick. She really does appreciate it when Ranma is nice to her, and that usually softens her up. She doesn't call him a pervert unless he does something clearly perverted (ie walking in on her in the bath, or insulteing her first).

Ranma's concern is a little over the top. Mainly, he would be really worried and care for her, but not be as open about it. He wouldn't actually say "you're more important". He would probably hide his concern by getting slightly angry, ie "I don't care if you are the biggest tomboy in Tokyo. Lie there and rest."

Very nice and well done story.

*wailing* That was so beautiful! *happy tears* I'm so happy! Perfect ending! *Blows kisses* Ja matta ne!

Great story! I loved the ending, I wish the real anime would have an ending like that. ^_^ Continue writing your a very good writer!
Sincerely,
Nie

This is very good please write an epiploue for this fanfic!

< Ranma/Akane > Over? So soon? Aww, not fair! *cough* Okay maybe it is fair. Hehe. Sorry about that, but I hope you will *WILL* continue! ^^ You're really talented. Yup. Very. -.-;; Write more!