 Mechanical Butterfly 2004-04-23 . chapter 2Oh wow!
I read the summary of this and I had to read some of it before I went to bed and so glad I did. It is awesome. I love fics like this! Also, totally loving the title to this story. Very nice...
Well keep up the great work...
I will be back tomorrow to review again!
^.*
-MB- |
 kitah-san 2003-12-25 . chapter 11First of all who in this messed up world uses the word sardonic...and where did you get this word. Second, how many people actually knows what it means (without useing context clues and w/o a dictionary)? jeeze Caitlyn you think you can make it any harder for the stupid people out there like me? |
 kitah-san 2003-12-22 . chapter 12I love it so far...has more detail in it that your "summerized version" in class. As said by everyone keep up the good work! |
 Dray 2003-12-22 . chapter 12 i liked it
earth here we come! |
 Lil Blonde Runner 2003-12-22 . chapter 12COOL. Ha! Vegita and his dad are mean! Sweet! Please continue I want to see what happens when they go to Earth! Do they meet the rest of the gang? Why did Bulma think that Earth was destroyed when she was seven? Knowing me, I probably missed that part. But please keep writing! |
 Dray 2003-12-21 . chapter 11 I like it, update asap! |
 Dray 2003-12-21 . chapter 11 I like it, update asap! |
 Bloodlust Night 2003-12-19 . chapter 10! I love this fic, dude! Its awesome as hell, I do hope you update, Nice plot.. |
 Dray 2003-12-19 . chapter 10 TWO CHAPTERS LEFT! Geez! I need to remember all the good stuff i read. *remembering*
*
**
*
*
etc. |
 vaguely-amused24 2003-12-19 . chapter 10well one more review for you... yay... good stuff... wow only two more... I can't wait to see what you do in two more chappies... good stuff... yay |
 Sugarysweet 2003-12-19 . chapter 10 This is story is really good. And you think you'll be done soon? I'm really curious now. Can't wait for the update! ~Sugarysweet |
 Dray 2003-12-14 . chapter 9 You update fast! :D
It's really good, This is the best I've seen Vegeta into character and still get Bulma! I like your thinking. |
 Nitte iz 2003-12-13 . chapter 8*blinks*
So he wanted Bulma to kill his bride. Well, that's Vegeta for you. |
 Deranged Medicine 2003-12-04 . chapter 7Update Soon!?
Im loving this story |
 Dray 2003-12-03 . chapter 7 Hm? Why does Veggie want Bulma? Hee hee hee this is such a god suspenceful fanfic. Keep writing! |