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vamp1987
2008-05-21 . chapter 1
I can't believe you actually made me cry when I read this. I never cry when I read things, but for some reason, your piece did the trick that others could not. Great Job! I felt so sorry for Tohru. She finally accepts Kyou into her life and she looses him. I can actually picture her on the roof threatening to jump, which wouldn't have killed her anyway (which she would have realized if she was thinking clearly). The worst part is that they robbed her of Kyou's memory so they could see her smiling face again, but they will never look at her without a glint of saddness in their eyes.

Sorry for the long ramble. Again, great job.
bloodredcherry
2008-04-05 . chapter 3
I am confused with Kyou, but I will keep reading and hopefully it will all make sense!
bloodredcherry
2008-04-05 . chapter 2
You might not like writing fluff but you do it well. :)
Serenity
2006-02-25 . chapter 1
The plotline is good, but you made Kyo so mean. He's never that mean to Tohru, even before he had feelings for her.
HarryPotterSweetie
2005-02-24 . chapter 8
That was an...interesting story. Started out all fluffy, and that was...nice, but then when Kyou died it got really sad...Some parts of it were a bit confusing to me, but that's probably because I read it kinda fast. :P
The ending is just so sad...Tohru doesn't remember...it's just...sad...(I have a large vocabulary, right? :P)
I really don't have more to say then that...It's kinda like you could have written more, but it would have been pointless, cause Tohru feels something is missing from her life...
I know this review makes no sence, sorry for that, but I just had to say something. :P
It really is sad! *shuts up before author thinks this reviewer is totally mental* -Missy
Megami284
2004-09-15 . chapter 8
That was deep. I cried at the roof scene with yuki and tohru. Wow...this story is very sad and depressing. But it was an awesome story. I love it when authors can put you through an emotional rollercoaster. And your story definetly took me for a ride. By the way I loved it.
ice
2004-08-17 . chapter 8
this should have a coclusion
KyosKitten
2004-04-28 . chapter 8
Wow. Oh my giddy-aunt wow. That was amazing. Very sad too. I loved it though. I wish Kyo could have lived though x..x
Michelle Munoz
2004-03-21 . chapter 6
me again! actually..great story..real tear jerker...but what happened at the end? that was so...sad! how could she just forget? she loved him! oh lordie...why did you kill him? jk, but still...so sad...real depressing. emial me if ya wanna
Michelle Munoz
2004-03-21 . chapter 7
Good story...but HOW DARE YOU KILL KYO!
Avelera
2004-02-02 . chapter 7
Oh...no... That's terrible! I mean, well written but why did you have to...do that? And did the curse get broken? See, that's what I'm confused about. Argh, now I'm crying... Good story.
Avelera
2004-02-02 . chapter 2
Ah, this story is so good! I love it, its really awesome. You did an awesome job with Akito who's usually portrayed as too villanous for words (which he is kinda but you hearkened back to the reason he's like that). And I like your fluff, it wasn't bad at all :)
Lillie Frost
2004-01-10 . chapter 7
So sad...But I LOVE ite!:)
~lily~
fruity
2003-12-28 . chapter 7
WOW... simply that is all I can say such a sad fic now usually my reviews never really get noticed but that was amazing. I was about to brake into tears over here. If only she could remember him. well g2g c ya.
Meliantha
2003-12-21 . chapter 7
Oh, it was all cute and fluffy, and then it was all angsty and sad...T-T But I have to say, you blended it very nicely...love the end especially. Good job! *pats on back*
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