WOW! This story is awesome! But are you going to continue this story?

cant u make this story longer u can rewrite the whole thing l8er but the last chapter was good so i think u should add to it

what I want, is a sequel~

S.E.Q.U.E.L

you just must!

The summary sounds a little too much like Hot Gimmick

Must put on fav. list so I can read the rest of it tomorrow. I'm too sleepy right now... -.-z

Reright? ... demo... deom... that means i The Colector have more to read. yah!

I really love your Fanfic! I can't wait 'till you continue! It's very fun reading it! Yuppers!
Momentine!!

But what the hell about the the next chapter, forget the fisrt few, give me the next.PLEASE!!

Please update soon. Nobody's updating the stories I want them to. So please will you update?!?!?!?! Update oh so soon. So I can be a happy camper. Not that you really care. hehehe JA

OMG! Your story rocks! PLS, PLS, CONTINUE!! And fast!! I have and exam coming and i won't be able to go online soon so PLS!

*tear* that was sad! I hope they get back together ^_^ great story!

Geez, I'm sorry, I can't finish this. The English is just really bad that it kills whatever potential the story might have had. Having to read through your aweful grammar, syntax and typographical errors is like driving uphill on a really rocky mountain, it ruins the view. And you don't do transitions well, either. Its really such a waste because the premise of the story is very enticing. I also agree with Cleo, your sentences, sans the technical errors, really come off sounding weird.

Yuki's a prick, I don't like him. HE should just do what he akways does and ingore his dad. He's stupid. I hope shu finds some one beter. can't wait it see what happens.
Bram

Look, I really like your story. I can't wait to finish it. BUT could you rewrite the whole thing or atleast have a friend read it first? You're english is totally screwed up that its starting to become annoying. And sometimes the dialogue comes off weird like "shut up, classmate of Yuki's!"

Sounds kinky, for some reason. I like it. :)