Oh! cliff hanger you mean person you, you have me hooked on this story and now I'm busting to no what happens. What questions will they ask I wonder. PLEASE UPDATE SOON I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS PLEASE...

Another short chapter but, it still was awesome I love how you made Piper act like a mom and worry and then go to pissed off mode in seconds it was funny and interesting. Update soon!

One of of your shorter chapters but good none the less. I also love how you made Chris drop tid bits of information in front of the Charmed Ones faces in this chapter it was great. Update Soon..

Awesome! I love how you brought Cole into this because I've always been a sucker for Cole and Phoebe. I also love how you've protrayed Chris his weird and witty sence of humor and witt is great. So all in all I love this chapter and, once agian please update agian soon..

Great story I love it, its awesome.

However I notice you haven't updated in a little while is there a reason for that or are you just busy. Please let me no soon because I'm dieing to no what happens.

Like the chapter it was great.

Your a good writer.

Great chapter.

Love the story its awesome.

Hopeyou update soon.

I love your story please update soon.

PLEASE

Aw! That's evil! Write more soon already!

Aww this is really good. Write more before I get to chapter 5 though!

More soon!

That last bit was a bit odd. Didn't go. Chris wouldn't just tell them everything like that. Not all the names. Doesn't he care that it might not happen now? Tell them somethings not everything.

Hey, I just realized your name is Emma-so is mine! Cool! Anyways, UPDATE soon! It's KILLING me!

this is a good story, plz continue!

Can't wait to see what he says

please please update, i wanna see leo's reaction when he finds out!