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| gengen07 2004-09-10 ch 1, | abuseI like it. You know... when I saw this episode, when Xander looked at her when all the gang realize what he did with Faith and when Willow cried in the bathroom... that break my heart... lol. But your story is great. And I like it. |
| JustAnnie 2004-05-26 ch 1, | abuseI love your story. I'm a huge Xander/Willow fan! And I always wished the writers had explained it more aswell. We never really knew why Willow was crying. Annoys me when they do that! |
| Lysa-uk 2003-11-15 ch 1, | abuseYay, I liked this fic. I always thought it was a bit stupid of the writers to intentionally put in a scene where Willow is all upset about the whole Faith and Xander thing and then never explain it or resolve it. This is something I definitely could have seen happening. I think this was really well written and I definitely think you should write more, preferably of the W/X persuasion, cos there certainly isn't enough of them out there. I think a lot of people have given up on the pairing, but we need to keep writing to keep hope, however futile, alive. I mean, just look at the stuff I've written and you'll see that I'm living in a dream world. |
| Kamikaze Snowball 2003-11-08 ch 1, | abuseYa know, I was thinking about writing a fic like this, being a X/W shipper myself, but you've covered it nicely. A job well done. ~LunarFaerie |
| SpIkEs AnGeL 2003-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww! Very cute fic!! Great job! |
| lightning bug 2003-11-07 ch 1, | abuseoh wow. That was just amazing. A wonderful, well written story. Willow and Xander forever. |
| Nikitangel 2003-11-07 ch 1, | abuseI liked it for it's feel-good qualities :-) And it covered a lot of things I felt were left out in the episode. And it didn't rag on Faith, so it wins with me! |
| Xattix 2003-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story. I'd always wished they'd elaborated that moment more |
| Steve 2003-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it but am confused by the timing. When Willow cried, Faith had just accidentally killed Finch with Buffy's help but she was still a white hat & they didn't know the mayor's plan for graduation yet. Pretty good characterization but you need to review season 3 a little more closely... |