Awesome! Please tell me there is a sequel!!

Great story, though I would appreciate clearer breaks in the future.

^_^

Not bad at all.

nice i loved it...

"Ah, he's releasing a homing torpedo. Excellent." said the Master
calmly.

that was one of the most rediculasly funny statements I've read all night. Also I would appreciate it if you would punctuate your scene changes better. Every time you change scence I'm left wonder what the heck is going on because I don't immediatly know that something is wrong.

I've been meaning to tell you for something like four chapters now that the Chancillors personal gaurds are dressed in blue it is the Emperor who's personal gaurds are dressed in red.

Amidalla and Jamilla are not their acutual names but rather their political names and as old freinds they would more likely call each other by their reall names.

You droped us into this whole thing much to suddenly. It obviously goes AU in PM or before and more then just Qui-gon not dieing yet we don't see that or have any kind of full explanation. This leaves us wondering who every one is and what they are talking about for several paragraphs before we figure it out. In my opinion this is a major flaw in your writing. Otherwise this shows great promise and I'm eager to read more.

Oh Dear...
How different things can be. I mean, Dooku a good guy, Qui-Gon as Anakin's master, Obi-Wan being so nice and outgoing, and Obi-Wan and Anakin really are brothers! (in a way...) and that's just the beginning!
Yep, this is deffinitely one great fic, I can't wait to go read the sequel!

interesting story

i like the storie very different well done

I really like it, I like the way you sort of mixed the movie with a diffrent universe.

I really liked your story. I hope to read more soon.

Now this story was positvely great to read.
I'd say if they had to rewrite AotC, this A.U. would be the best. Especially, since you don't have Anakin suffering at every turn and there's new elements into the story. Which make it much more interesting.

Really good, and I enjoyed reading i a lot.

i just recently discovered your story, and I must say well done. I enjoyed it thoroughly. The changes were well thought out and your interactions between each of the characters was spot on. I'm looking forward to more.

Wow... that was awesome! A brilliant version of AotC... I loved it! :)