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| MS Vaughn 2004-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow seiruosly amazed at what a great grip you have on their feelings from season 3. Amazing, and your pieces are great...heartbreaking and angsty, but great. They bring me right back into the episodes and pull out clips the way only good fanfics truly can. --Colleen-- |
| akatolstoy 2004-06-09 ch 1,  | abuseHeartaching and true. Well done! |
| Belligerent-road-pylon 2003-11-09 ch 1, | abuseDamn you are good! *bows down to you* my god! |
| SilverTree 2003-11-07 ch 1, | abuseGee, it's hard to express how I feel about this piece because I'm really conflicted. I'm amazed at your ability to get inside Vaughn's head and follow his thoughts. This is a really unique idea for a fic - the concept that Vaughn is so overwhelmed by his love for Syd that he wishes (in some ways) that he could be rid of her. That's incredible, and you've captured it so vividly! I can see what you were going for with the italicized streamofconsciousnessthesearethethoughtsthatarecrammingthroughmyheadrightthissecond parts of the story, but I have to admit that it made the piece *very* painful to read. You've chosen a truly powerful and unique way to represent the inner voice of the character, but too much of a good thing is not a good thing. In my humble opinion, the overuse of this device has drained away most - if not all - of its impact. Because those parts were so difficult to read (and there were just so darn many of them), I have to admit that I started skipping over them in frustration. Like anything that an author uses over and over again, it got dull and ineffective from sheer exhaustion. Please understand, I really did appreciate the story and I think you have incredible talent. Thanks so much for posting this piece. Regards, Stacey |
| The Little Dragon 2003-11-07 ch 1, | abuseI like! I like a lot! |
| Jessie 2003-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat great story. One of the best Vaughn POV that I've seen. I loved your writing style as well. Good job! |
| lannie 2003-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is really good! It's very emotional. |