Wow, another exciting chapter, I love your story so much and I can honestly say that this story is my favorite on this site without a doubt. I can't wait to see what else comes...hopefully it includes more murderous/psychotic peeved Sands LoL.

-Lauren

Bloody Fantastic!

Who's playing mind games with Sands? Very curious to find out...seems like the closer he's getting, the more he's getting messed with. Smooth moves with Tina...loved the final line he delivered to her.

Hoping there's a blaze of glory but he doesn't go down with it.

As always, keep it up! Been anxiously awaiting this chapter and you did not disappoint!

Hi, Great chapter but I have one problem "Cam wiped his mouth with a napkin. “Beef. It’s what’s for dinner.”

“Haven’t you ever heard of the other white meat?” Sands asked dryly and, noticing Cam’s confused expression added, “You know, pork?”" How would Sands know that Cam didn't know what he was talking about. Just thought I would point that out.

Luv DEPP4EVA

I'm so happy you've updated. It just makes my day when I actually have something to read. Sorry I didn't review sooner, but it's been hectic, you know?

It was *so* worth the wait!

Alright... I don't really know what to say, because of the perfection of this chapter. We had conniving Sands, slightly vulnerable Sands, sardonic Sands, everything that's good and happy. So I suppose all I can say is that I thought the bit with Jackson's corpse was cool.

EP41

I can't wait for the next chapter! It keeps on getting better and better!

"Carnivorous Leech" LOL! Why do these Special Ops always have such odd, non-sequitor names? One of my favorites had one called "Nifty Dolphin". Things that make you go 'Huh?'

"Beef. It's what's for dinner."

Ok, I LOVED that one! How many remember those comercials? I could hear Copland's "Ho-Down" music playing in my head as soon as I read this. Too funny.

A chapter well worth waiting for - as if any of them haven't been, but I just thought I'd say it again. ) The touches of humor - both the true and the bitter, are wonderful. The psycological games underway are chilling in the extreme, and the tension is mounting. I'm on the edge of my seat here, lady! lol

Wonderfully scripted, and I'm waiting for the next twists and turns with baited breath!

HA! That was great! That chapter really rocked my socks! Very groovy. ;)

As always, it was EXCELLENT writing!

Were those Officer Sands action figures a limmited time offer? Seriously though i really love this fic.

Scarlett:

Poor Sands...He is getting tired. Poor guy keeps getting shot...

Great dialogue between him and Cam.

You made up for the long time in between updates...Keep up the good work!

hello,hope u had a joyfull holiday also...good luck, good lob and i can't wait...continue soon FArewell...p.s. poor sands he got shot...ohh well it always makes it more interestiong when he get's hurt...lol

I knew finishing my English final would bring good things. Namely allowing me to read your latest, wonderful, update. As always everything is perfect. Many long stories loose their momentum, or their plot starts to fall apart, or the characterization becomes worse and worse, but not this one. Every chapter is a good as, or better than, the one before it. And the long length of each chapter is really nice, letting us get back into the story.

Great job!

-FPP

Wow. Scarlett this was just...wow. Great chapter! I loved it! Well except for the part where SJ got shot. That wasn't so fun. But everything else was masterful. :-D I especially loved the "Carniverous Leech" part. That cracked me up. :-D Anyway, superb chapter as per usual. I hope you'll update again soon-like tomorrow-but if not, I'll most assuredly wait. :-)

-Merrie

"Feeling violent today?"

"No, just creative with weapons." - Oh...and the difference being? ;P

"...idly spinning his plate on the table with an index finger and listening to the sound it made as the ceramic turned on the wooden tabletop." -I can really imagine that so clearly.

“Ready? I’d hate to rush you,” - ha! Sands, you're such a meanie :P

“That’s classified information, Chicken Little"-hahaha! Scarlett, you fill your fics with so many good lines :D

"This is a non-smoking room."

"Not anymore." There you go again! Too funny :)

“I find it interesting that I told you to get any documents with my name on them, and you never asked what my full name actually is.”-oops, El is not having a good day at the office today, is he?

“We’re going to let the bastards catch us.”-I hate those kind of plans...too many things could go wrong :S I suppose I should trust Sands though.

"Looking for this?"

"In a manner of speaking."-ouch.

“Don’t run. You’ll just die tired.” Good one :D

"I have seen too much." :O! WHAT?

“I haven’t seen him."-that one almost slipped by me unnoticed.

“Because of all the people I know, you’re one of them." - good line!

“Are you really blind, or is it just an act?” -big ouch. She probably shouldn't have said that.

“My biggest problem is that I believe everything that I tell myself.”- :( Sands is opening up a little to Cam, is he? I hope Cam can handle it.

“If you think you’re anything but the shark, than you really are crazy.”- aw Cam! *hugs Cam tightly*

Wonderful chapter Scarlett, as usual. I really enjoyed it, thank you. :D

This was an excellent chapter, and I apologize for taking a month to read it. You seemed to have a "death is better than this" theme running through this chapter and I liked that alot. Hopw you update soon!