Ok, this is kind of dirty, but also funny so i thought I'd tell you, at that part when Rinoa goes "Woah" at first I thought it was Seifer talking and I was like, 'why would he say that?'and then I thought, 'oh... did he just get a **?'
Suffice to say I was very confused when rinoa was mentioned.

Hey do you read Maximum Ride? By the way love this so far. I was having troubled with the SxQ but now I can totally see it. Great job.

Love this story, and the sequel. Honest, first I read it I think it will be about Seifer/Rinoa. I can't say how relieved I am that it's not what this is about, even though the canon pairing itself is actually kind of impaired on most fanfic. Glad that there's no Rinoa bashing here (Squall bashing is okay, he's cool, he can take it...) but this is the first fic I ever read, that Rinoa is so cool and smart. I like it for a change!

PROJECT SEIFTIS!? You're absolutely brill! I'd also like to mention that you've got a great feel of Seifer's personality. Every word that comes out of his mouth stays true to his image.

"Fine," Seifer sighed. "We'll dance and I'll grope you and then we'll go."

It reminds us why we all love him in the first place. -dreamy sigh-

Geesh, I've passed the halfway point and haven't left you a single review. Shame on me!

This fic is a nonstop giggle fest. I went especially insane when Squall dropped his ice cream into the tub...LMAO. You write comedy very, very well. It especially enhances your story to include characters' thoughts in *'s.

I know I've got so much more to say, but I'm too busy laughing at the moment to type anything coherent.

Just wanted to let you know, Captain is a rank lower than Commander.

Other than that, this story was great. This is actually my second time reading it. ^^

ciao *waves*
Queen0

Ahh, perfect ending! (:

Loved it all! Squall's proposal was so CUTE! Kudos to him in all white too, like he's Rinoa's knight in shining white. (:

And we finally know where Seifer learned to act, ahahahah JULIET?! Just wow. Yay to the success of the play too, and now off to the sequel! With more plays? (:

Oh, I totally KNEW Squall had passed Seifer, mhm. Ahh, our little Orphanage Gang's so adorable(x Plus crazy Selphie and her trying to freak Quistis out!

And LOL at pervy little Squall, yet again! He's not getting any anytime soon, ehh?

Oh Project Seiftis?!?! Interesting... O=

Oh wow, I thought that girl was just made up by Rinoa O= Lol, but Squall buying Rinoa's err.. products? Nice as always(:

BUT WHAT HAPPENED TO SEIFER?!?! >:O

LOL Irvine and flawless skin? Creepy how I can imagine that o_o And poor Squall, ahahah. Poor Seifer too, I guess. He wasn't wrong when he said he had admirers O=

Squall is quite the pervert ehh ._.

Ahh, it's a conspiracy! Everyone's teaming up against Irvine O=
And Seifer not knowing who Zephyr is just hilarious. (: If only he knew, hahaha nice(:

Oh my god. I seriously just LOL'ed in this chapter so much(: The scenes in the mall, I could totally picture in my head and a crying Squall! Oh my. Haha and Seifer and his potty mouth!

And when Seifer was giving Quistis her present! So cute and entertaining all at the same time! "Seifer...do you sell yourself?" Oh, LOLOLOL! Hahaha, I just loved that part. Nicee(:

And Zell and them know who the characters are based off of?! Poor Irvine :/ But entertaining nonetheless(:

And Rinoa and Selphie should work on those spying skills, but who can resist with Quistis and Seifer?! You really make them sound like EXCELLENT actors(:

LOL, Squall is just wow, haha(: I loove how you portray all the characters in here. They're so fun and cute and loveable and CUTE! In their own little ways(:

And just super LOL to when Squall freaked, aand the Quistis and Seifer stuff, just genius. (:

Laguna and Squall love, or the lack of it, has got to be the funniest love ever. And Zell is so hot dog high, it's gone to his head and made his IQ low, haha.

LOL, I wonder when Squall blushes exactly ehh? Ahah, and that kiss between Quistis and Seifer was pretty nice ;DD I can tell they both liked it coughcough(:

LOL, oh jeez only Selphie would go for huge, bright, flashy signs, but we love her anyway. And poor Irvine! Oh well, as long as we get a laugh or two right? (: Ahh, I wonder where Seifer learned to act? And couple shots?! Can't wait to see... or read that, ehehehe (: