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| Ashlover121 2008-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood stpry. PLEASE CONTINUE! ~Ashlover121~ |
| FaLlEn-AnGeL627 2007-08-22 ch 1,  | abuseyea im guessing thats going 2 be ash's mom well lov it plz update soon PLZ! |
| Go-ruden Kiba 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abusewow, this is good. can't wait to see what happens next! update soon! this looks like it's going to be really good. update soon! |
| Erokh 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abuseI liked it...it was very different! Please continue! |
| The Yaoi Mistress 2004-05-16 ch 1, | abusehi, i must say that this fic is intrige, and i want to see the next chapter. see you |
| Etherelemental 2004-04-28 ch 1, | abuseWell, that was certainly interesting. Though, I'm wondering when you'll post the next chapter. I had thought that it would start of with Ash moving to his mother's but, now I'm not too sure of what you'll do in this chapter. Though, it could also be the guy's Espeon that is using it's telepathy to erase all the fear that she'd elsewise be experiencing. But that's just my thought about it. Though, I'm not personally a fan of lemon scenes, this was all right. Anyway, please continue this. It can't really get any worse, as all of your other works that I've read were definitely better than this short piece. So, please update soon. ^_^ |
| Hdfhdhdh 2003-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe summary has nothing to do with the story but I like it. Write another chapter telling what happens. |
| Jarzard 2003-11-25 ch 1, | abuseShould I venture the guess that that girl was Ash's mum? but this is my kind of story... yeppers |
| fyreblazen 2003-11-07 ch 1, | abusewierd |