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Belief.
2004-06-07 . chapter 1
Beautiful, really beautiful & heartbreaking. Trinity's POV has been portrayrd very well.;'so full of love,acceptance & above all faith, that he bows his head'. It is so true. Trinity represents faith & strength.I admire her commitment to her belief.Their relationship is sacred & immortal. You've captured the essence commendably.Keep writing such rlevating & heartwarming stories.
shipperchick
2003-11-10 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Tenderly, gracefully etched, and utterly heartbreaking, but uplifting. Well, well, well done.
Marsha
2003-11-10 . chapter 1
I loved this story. Utterly beautiful and the P.O.V. is believable (a rare trick).

Except that it made me sad again :(
Jennifer Jolie
2003-11-09 . chapter 1
I rarely review these days, but this is magnificent. Absolutely beautiful. What took you so long?
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2003-11-08 . chapter 1
Brilliant, I loved this. It was beautiful, and the story just flowed naturally. Please write more.
Kaydee
2003-11-08 . chapter 1
So true, to true.
-Kaydee
Divamercury
2003-11-08 . chapter 1
This was beautiful. Thank you so much!

~DM
joviality
2003-11-08 . chapter 1
Nice. Like the way ou write, very natural. You can describe what you want to bring across very well, keep it up =)
Elena
2003-11-08 . chapter 1
Wonderful. Heart-breaking. Wonderful.

I loved this.
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