Reviews for The Strength of the Soul

Reviews For: The Strength of the Soul - Reviews: Page 1 of 9

Shadow in the Rain 2008-01-21 ch 1,	abusethis is AMAZING-can't wait to read the next chapter. :D
poka 2007-07-19 ch 6,	abuseOOH, BECAUSE OF THESE CLIFFIES, I AM SO GOING 2 KILL YOU! tosses knife up and down and throws it, just missing
Dragon Master Paul 2007-06-20 ch 2,	abusei cant believe it over i read it for 4 hours straight and im still crying that its over this is like an epic ending to my childhood
Dragon Master Paul 2007-06-20 ch 1,	abusealmost forgoy my email is p. id apreciate it
Dragon Master Paul 2007-06-20 ch 10,	abuseGreat story the best i have ever read im so glad you made it it made me laugh and it made me cry. i was a huge pokemon fan growing up and i will never forget this story thank you very much. no criticism but can u email me and tell me why you didnt really use any pokemon in this story
A Parliament of Owls 2007-06-04 ch 2, anon.	abuseI've never read any of your humor fics so I can't really compare, but I do think that this story has been a little melodramatic so far. The writing is excellent, but there are a few (small) plotholes in my opinion. I don't understand why or how Misty could be forced to kill Ash since the price of failure seems to be her own death and she cares enough about him to die for him. Nor can Ash's death be held against her because he's going to die anyway, and if refuses to carry out her mission, he would die at the hands of somebody else instead of forcing her to go through with all that emotional turmoil. But that's probably just me being nit-picky and for a person who's never done drama before, this is a very good beginning to what will no doubt be a very good piece of writing. There's no offense meant by this review, just a bit of constructive criticism.
rozukitsune 2006-03-29 ch 10,	abusesniffs wow. ;-; What an awesome story. sniffs I hope that someday I can write as well as you. :) sniffs wah!
Achon 2005-01-26 ch 10,	abuseJaw drop... Drumroll... Drool... Finally found this fic!! I read it before, but lost it before getting a screen name and a web page. You are a demi-god of fanfic, god of the Pokemon section. See my favorite page to see more of who I think are gods. (And about Cavern of A Million Colors, I know its the regular age, but imagine them grown up, and it flows really well.) Wishing you calm music, soft nights, more reviews, and a inspirational idea like Pokemon Master, Achon
Tiger64 2004-11-17 ch 2, anon.	abuseWhat do ya mean it was difficult to write? YOU DIDN'T ADD ANY DETAILS! When you do then I'll agree with you. Good story. -Tiger64
Kohikari 2004-11-09 ch 10, anon.	abuseOh...my...God... That was...amazing. But so sad! God...wow... God... Heh. That seems to be all I am capable of saying at the moment. ...WOW... You rule. You just do. Wow. Keep writing, girl. Just keep writing. --Kohikari*
inu-gang-sister1789 2004-09-18 ch 1,	abuseit was good i liked it and by the way, IMADE A FRICKIN MISTAKE, U DON'T HAVE TO FLAME ME U LOSER! I'M A N00B HERE DEAL WITH IT, AND IN THE IMMORTAL WORDS OF STEWIE... DAMN YOU! but your story was great
Burnt Flower 2004-08-18 ch 10,	abuse! ...Congratulations on writing one of the best (if not the BEST) dramatic AAMLs. The ending was truly unexpected. Hell, I didn't see most of those twists coming. You pulled it off perfectly. Oh, and one more thing. You're one of the few precious writers who can write various types of genres (comedy, drama, romance) without failing abismally. Oh, and PLEASE write more! I couldn't get enough of your story. :)
Lakewood 2004-05-13 ch 1,	abuseI must say that this story has really caught my attention. I love the storyline provided and the great attention to detail. You have achieved the task of being able to paint a mental image with your words: a skill that I am still striving for. I also enjoy how you haved turned something that was originally set with a childish demeaner by the series into something that anyone can enjoy. Also, a Grammar Nazi you must be. I mean that in a good way since not many people will attempt to make their stories as perfect as can be, and they will let grammar play 'loose' in their stories. In your story the sentence structure is perfect, the formatting is excellent, and grammar mistakes are non-existent. This is truly a remarkable feat if you compare it to most other fanfics out there. I have only read your prologue, but I intend to read the rest of this story once I get the sufficient amount of time I need. I am not capable of finding anything to complain about with your story. Everything seems to be so... perfect. The only suggestion that I can make would be hypocritic since it is a problem that I have myself and have yet to correct. Sometimes when we(writers) write our stories, we can't wait to get to a certain part of a story. This causes us to 'rush' our story along and can result in a hindering of detail or some other aspect of the story. I have yet to correct this problem in my writings, but at least I know about it. This does not seem to be a problem in your story, but I could tell that there are some things that you are anxious to get into, especially at the end of the chapter. But, as I said, I'm being hypocritical since I have this problem, and this may not even be a problem for you. I just figured that I would at least warn about one of the common 'hazards' for writers. This is a very grand and well thought out story. I will read more when I next get the chance. Also, I want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my story. Keep up the good work.
DaJollyMan 2004-03-22 ch 10,	abuseomfg(Xcuse my language ^_^)- this has got to be the most drama filled AAML story I've ever read, and believe me I've read many. Damn, the story line and details were very tasteful and unique. You sure do have talent =P, damn I've never really read a story where Misty has had a tragic experience with forced sexual actions and where it has been emphasized as much as this story has. I seriously felt like killing that dude until I realized it was a story... ahh what can I say... brillant. PS: insomnia was very funny especially therapeatic therapy. Hope you continue writing more AAML fanfics. err I hope you get this review and it didn't go to some old email, I just want to let you know that your fics are being read and people do appreciate your writing. ^_^
Guillaume HJ 2004-03-17 ch 10,	abuseThat was quite the excellent piece of fiction - I like tragic yet fitting ending like this one had. Great work.

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