I'm extremely glad you made this fic; IT'S REALLY CUTE!! GREAT JOB! ^^

hmm , this one is also one that made me think.
I was writing something abou the sun and the moon, but I looked it as 'Can they be enemies?'
In a way i guess they do help each other.

Hm yeah i can see the resemblance of Shu/Eiri and Sun/moon - pretty nice the way've you've done it too, with Eiri telling straight off no to Tohma!

love it!

Aw! That's so sweet!
Shu-chan: *kisses Yuki* Chu

That was really good. Short and sweet. I love the last part when he was explaining about the moon and the sun. Sounds just like what a romance novelist would say :)

Kawaii, kawaii, kawaii, kawaii! >_< I loved it... You had a very lovely point :) I loved Yuki's response!! ^_^ You should continue and make Tohma tell Shuichi, then Shu confront Yuki about it... >< Can't you just se the fluffiness now?!!? W00t! ::hugs::

~Shi

That is such an adorable fic! I just loved it. ^.^ Good analogy too. Hadn't really thought about it before but it makes sense.

ok...that was just good. i love the comparison. damn...i like that!

OH MY KAMI-SAMA! THIS IS SO COOL! yah, its short but thats not the point, its THE WAY YOU DEPICTED THIS STORY THAT ROCKS! i loved it.

YAY! I like, it is so cute!!

Hi Mina-san,

YEY! So far so good.
I can't wait to see what will happen next!! Hurry
with the next chapter!

Ja ne

Aw...that was wicked cute...I feel all squishy inside.

I LIKE IT.

Tohma the bastard... he just wants Yuki for himself.

Take that Tohma! hehehe...nice view of the relationship...and really true! I love it!

Mistal
peace~